|Reviews for Noticing Adam|
| LadyKatherine29 5/26/07 . chapter 16
Brilliant. This was great and worth the wait. I still just adore this compleatly. The plot is really moving along, the flow is excellent and you have so much great conflect, drama and emotional povs, with emotional torment. This has been a wild ride from the start. I can't thank you enough for having started this. I can hardly wait to see what twists and turns come next.
| BratCat 5/26/07 . chapter 16
ya koe? i've been tryin to find episodes where adam and adora met each other n i cant find it anywhere! argh!
..keep it up
| Classic Cowboy 5/25/07 . chapter 16
was starting to lose hope on this getting updated! very plesent surprise seeing this back. Randor successfully shoved his foot down his throat even farther then before, who knew that was possible? now lets see how Adora handles the situation, and further more Marlena and Teela's take on what they just witnessed. keep up the great work!
| Issa 5/25/07 . chapter 16
I've really been enjoying your story so far. I'm looking forward to the next installment
| TJ 5/18/07 . chapter 15
Still reading this...do not leave us dry.
| Crystal Knight 5/5/07 . chapter 1
Nice story, please I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! I hope Adam tells his parents the truth!
| anichan 3/31/07 . chapter 15
ne ne, when are you going to update? Your story is so good, and your writing blows me away! Keep it up! _
| IdontKnow 3/30/07 . chapter 15
This is one of the best fic I have every read, you got to finish it, please.
| Dana 3/5/07 . chapter 15
this story is really cool. could you please finish it?
| melissa 2/6/07 . chapter 15
ok, I just found this story and read all the chapters and you better be updating real soon, I am really enjoying this story and you are doing a great job!
| Liandra O'Hara 1/31/07 . chapter 15
ARGH! Don't quit there! LOL We *have* to know what happens now!
Geesh it's about time Randor grew a brain...but Marlena shouldn't have had to plant it for him ROFL Gah men...can't live with 'em...etc etc etc.
Randor needs to 'fess up and TELL HIS SON HOW MUCH HE CARES and start showing him as well. Like Marlena tried to get him to do...show an interest in Adam as HIS SON not Eternia's Crown Prince.
| hanna 1/28/07 . chapter 15
well, I really like the story. You do well working the different emotions of the characters in. writers tend to have a hard time with that. good job! _
| ponytail 1/18/07 . chapter 15
I'm so glad to see you're still working on this story! I'm interested in see what Randor has to say since he can't just say, "I'm sorry" and get away with the last years.
| ScareGlow 1/15/07 . chapter 1
Ah, what a pity, no Adora! *g* Great chapter, though. Let's see what the next talk between parents and son will bring...
| Ebby 1/11/07 . chapter 15
I like this story and this chapter. You really get the emotions down right. Please update.