|Reviews for Noticing Adam|
| Classic Cowboy 4/28/13 . chapter 45
Randor's heading to fight with his son's sword in hand, now that's an epic image if I ever mentally pictured one.
this was an excellent chapter, definately looking forward to the coming battle
| Alphalover 4/28/13 . chapter 45
Sooooo good. Love randor s mental journey of growth
| starrdancerr 4/20/13 . chapter 44
I haven't ever really read any He-Man stories or watched the show, but this was the top story on the favorites list of one of my favorite authors and I decided to look at it to save and read later because I was in the middle of another story and trying to work on my resume (which I don't want to do). I ended up reading it straight through and have been reading it for four hours. This story is awesome and I hope you continue it. I want to watch He-Man and She-Ra now.
| Adeela 4/20/13 . chapter 44
So Skeletor is both a winner and a loser,nice one ;) and yes this was indeed a very good chapter..you managed to put up the surprise element(I hope you got what I meant by ). He Man hasn't shown from many chapters...waiting for next chapter...post soon :)
| Deathmvp 4/17/13 . chapter 44
Nice work on Skelly fight vs Hord I just wish it was longer. I also love how you are showing in this chapter why Randor is the High King.
| Gelendra 4/17/13 . chapter 44
OMG please post again soon! I had to admit these last few chapters had me positively enthralled, and in this one I was cheering for Randor, that he finally accepted Adam as He-Man, and now all I want is for Adam to get back there so they can -finally- straighten things out once and for all!
| Emilly 4/17/13 . chapter 44
I really like this story. This one really interested. After reading the summary, I just realized, sort of, what happens! That chapter was sooo good!
| Guest 4/17/13 . chapter 1
Please don't take this the wrong wai but... I do not know the characters deeply.I'm still familiarizing myself with world-HEMAN/SHERA. I am curious as to what will happen.
| skyfreedon 4/17/13 . chapter 44
Wow! action, action, action. So many interesting happenings at once! This storyis so Epic! It has great plot and great details. Really awesome word I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| JustLucky05 4/17/13 . chapter 44
excellent! I love the way you are building this up. I can't wait to see where you take it. keep up the great work.
| TeelanaFalcao 4/17/13 . chapter 44
A luta de Esqueleto e Hordak foi incrível! Gostei que Esqueleto ganhou a luta. Randor tem razão:" Shera era mais que Adora e Adora era como Shera ( se é que faz algum sentido )". Faz todo sentido para mim! Adam entendeu que ele e Heman são um só. Não dois mais UM! Este capítulo foi Inacreditavelmente MARAVILHOSO!
| skyfreedon 4/16/13 . chapter 43
Action! I like action. Shera has to kick some ass! Beautiful chapter! Simply amazing! I really like this story.
| skyfreedon 4/16/13 . chapter 42
That was great! Hordak and Skeletor?! wow! What happen next?
| Guest 4/16/13 . chapter 43
Good chapter. I love this story! It's my favorite! I can't wait to see what Randor does next. I also can't wait to see the outcome of Skeletor amd Hordak's fight. Post more soon.
| Adeela 4/16/13 . chapter 43
Two chapters...great but still that cliffhanger..you really know how to keep people checking your stories regularly ;) Randor's acceptance seemed a little quick to me but I would like to read more chapters before commenting on that one..Looking forward to Adam's escape but I am more interested to know about winner of Skeletor vs. Hordak ..post soon :)