Randor's heading to fight with his son's sword in hand, now that's an epic image if I ever mentally pictured one.

this was an excellent chapter, definately looking forward to the coming battle

Sooooo good. Love randor s mental journey of growth

I haven't ever really read any He-Man stories or watched the show, but this was the top story on the favorites list of one of my favorite authors and I decided to look at it to save and read later because I was in the middle of another story and trying to work on my resume (which I don't want to do). I ended up reading it straight through and have been reading it for four hours. This story is awesome and I hope you continue it. I want to watch He-Man and She-Ra now.

So Skeletor is both a winner and a loser,nice one ;) and yes this was indeed a very good chapter..you managed to put up the surprise element(I hope you got what I meant by ). He Man hasn't shown from many chapters...waiting for next chapter...post soon :)

Nice work on Skelly fight vs Hord I just wish it was longer. I also love how you are showing in this chapter why Randor is the High King.

OMG please post again soon! I had to admit these last few chapters had me positively enthralled, and in this one I was cheering for Randor, that he finally accepted Adam as He-Man, and now all I want is for Adam to get back there so they can -finally- straighten things out once and for all!

I really like this story. This one really interested. After reading the summary, I just realized, sort of, what happens! That chapter was sooo good!

Please don't take this the wrong wai but... I do not know the characters deeply.I'm still familiarizing myself with world-HEMAN/SHERA. I am curious as to what will happen.

Wow! action, action, action. So many interesting happenings at once! This storyis so Epic! It has great plot and great details. Really awesome word I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

excellent! I love the way you are building this up. I can't wait to see where you take it. keep up the great work.

A luta de Esqueleto e Hordak foi incrível! Gostei que Esqueleto ganhou a luta. Randor tem razão:" Shera era mais que Adora e Adora era como Shera ( se é que faz algum sentido )". Faz todo sentido para mim! Adam entendeu que ele e Heman são um só. Não dois mais UM! Este capítulo foi Inacreditavelmente MARAVILHOSO!

Action! I like action. Shera has to kick some ass! Beautiful chapter! Simply amazing! I really like this story.

That was great! Hordak and Skeletor?! wow! What happen next?

Good chapter. I love this story! It's my favorite! I can't wait to see what Randor does next. I also can't wait to see the outcome of Skeletor amd Hordak's fight. Post more soon.

Two chapters...great but still that cliffhanger..you really know how to keep people checking your stories regularly ;) Randor's acceptance seemed a little quick to me but I would like to read more chapters before commenting on that one..Looking forward to Adam's escape but I am more interested to know about winner of Skeletor vs. Hordak ..post soon :)