I like this. Yes, I too believe Susan got robbed. One of the only things I didn't like was that she never got back to Narnia. Great job on this.

Wow. That was very good. I could feel Susan's pain and see her in her "environment". I've always felt bad for Susan: too caught up in the world. This was an excellent poem. Keep up the good work!

She was left behind becasue she did not believe in Aslan anymore. Aslan told her she couldn't go back to Narnia so she moved on unlike her sister and Brothers when they were told. She represents in the book the ones who believe when they are young and believing came easily but when she got older she no longer believed.

I strongly think that after something like her siblings dying that she would turn her life around so that she would be in Aslan's favor again.