This was actually really good. ^-^ I liked it a lot. And I really just began to start liking Serenity...If what I just said even made sense. *laughs* Anyway, keep it up. I'm looking forward to more stories from you.

I think it's brilliant, creative and beautiful! (So what if Kaiba and the others are OOC? That's part of the alternate universe. I don't mind the OOC-ness a bit.) This is a wonderful story! I like it.
Keep up your super-lovely, awesome writing! :)

I loved it! You did a marvelous job! Hey if you need it i can go through the story and correct the grammar and stuff for you lemme know! BelovedDelusion

Why have I not read this before? It's absaloutly brilliant...

Very nice... Love it!

You've got my interest... It's a great fic!

Interesting...What happens next, I wonder?

So, this is the one with five chapters... The prologue is great...

i loved it
kawaii

Excellenta. the story is now done... Wa. Okay that was weird. 0.o

Sorry I'm sorta hyper at the moment. It was a good story, vbut sadly all good stories must come to an end at some point in time.

-GOD Ara a.k.a AnimeQueenSaphira

that was a beautiful story, it had pretty much everything! drama, action(both kinds winkwink) romance -sighs happily- a really great story, im envious! >.< i cnt write nething like that -_-'' but i try neway... again i say that was a great story! ^-^ (favs story)

wow! that was so..so..so..so. AWESOME! LOL. i loved it!

Aw... that was a very...hm...what should I say? more than good anyway ^^,
It was awesome...I like the ending best XD
It made me shiver ;)

i love the ending then again i love your stories ! i hope to read more of your writing !

hey sorry i didn't realize that last night my computer was messing up and only let me see ch1 and 2. but its a great story.