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| imaginaryfriend09 2006-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseErg? What?! Arg! ...Now for some actual words. This series is such a joy to read, it's so damn good. |
| Yain 2005-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story! You write so well, and it's funny and interesting, and I hope you keep writing more after you finish this story. |
| tulzdavampslayer 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abusesniff. beautiful. |
| Katinka31 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuse>>He seems to sigh as he turns back, and she can feel the exhale, the air-bubbles rising to the surface and break there, the only evidence there was anything hiding under the waves at all. You're created some gorgeous, gorgeous imagery here, and the River/Jayne vibe is all the more enjoyable for its subtle, nuanced nature. :) Brava! |
| Tan-is-a-fan 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAww... He really left? Darn. He'll come back though, right? Right?? I loved this bit, especially the waves metaphor. You described it beautifully and made it fit perfectly with River's reaction to Jayne's departure. I wish I could write that well. It's a perfect example of what a fantastic writer you are. *Hug* for the great update, looking forward to the next bit!! |
| winkingannie 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseUm...should we be worried about River touching the knives? Make Jayne come back! *please* |
| Leology 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI hope you post again soon! |
| bugchicklv 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuse*CRIES* Bring him back. Please? |