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SylvanSpirit
2008-08-04
ch 15,
abuseomg omg omg!
this is so good..
please please tell me u haven't stopped writing this!
please!! xDD
this is really really good!
i hope mel doesnt die..
please update soon!
WellxWisher
2008-03-08
ch 15,
abuse!
So, I was just procrastinating starting my homework, randomly flipping (or I guess it would be clicking, seeing as how it's online) through the archives and I find this and am totally blown away! I noticed that you haven't updated since last year; I completely understand the intrusion of life upon fanfic writing, but I do hope that you'll continue with this wonderful story someday. :-)
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
2007-12-10
ch 9,
abuseHere we go the face of with Wyatt, it is one of my favorite parts in Chriss-Cross.

Blessed Be

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
2007-12-09
ch 5,
abuseI have found this story to have some amazingly interesting twists. Brillant writing.

Blessed Be

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Elisha
2007-07-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseis no stranger to the manner - I believe you meant Manor. Spelling and grammar are very important when trying to get a story across.
Fae Child19
2007-07-18
ch 15,
abuseThat's a horrible place to leave us, Mel is a wonderful character. Great story!
Sally
2007-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseManner and Manor mean two different things. Manor means spalatial dwelling. I believe that's what you meant but that's not how it came off. That's why proofread is so important.
Tommyfan4ever
2007-06-26
ch 14,
abuseGreat story; I hope the Charmed Ones find out who 'Mel' really is before it's too late.
aerohead1980
2007-06-18
ch 15,
abuseGreat chapter.
DemonessLeader
2007-06-16
ch 15,
abuseI like it but please update quicker this time.
Summer Jasmine
2007-06-16
ch 15,
abuseI understand her intentions are good about not telling Chris, but maybe with his help she can cope with it better or something like that. Great work.
scme
2007-06-15
ch 15,
abuseabsolutley love this fic! just read all 15 chapters so far! i know it was a while a go but i loved how you did the future epsidoe stuff but added melinda in etc - thought it was relly well done. and now poor melinda is dying! so unfair! hope you update soon! please!
crazyDFFgang
2007-06-15
ch 15,
abuseWow... I hope they can help her...
(Chrissy.W.x, crazyDFFgang-member)
lizardmomma
2007-06-15
ch 15,
abusei think you are doing a wonderful job with the story
MissHaunted-MoonLight
2007-06-15
ch 15,
abuseOh dear. Poor Mel. Poor Chris. Poor Future.

Brilliant, as usual! Can't wait for more! ^^

Huge hugs,
Peanut x X x X x
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