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| WellxWisher 2008-03-08 ch 15, | abuse! So, I was just procrastinating starting my homework, randomly flipping (or I guess it would be clicking, seeing as how it's online) through the archives and I find this and am totally blown away! I noticed that you haven't updated since last year; I completely understand the intrusion of life upon fanfic writing, but I do hope that you'll continue with this wonderful story someday. :-) |
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2007-12-10 ch 9, | abuseHere we go the face of with Wyatt, it is one of my favorite parts in Chriss-Cross. Blessed Be TaintedDarkInuShemeeko |
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2007-12-09 ch 5, | abuseI have found this story to have some amazingly interesting twists. Brillant writing. Blessed Be TaintedDarkInuShemeeko |
| Elisha 2007-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseis no stranger to the manner - I believe you meant Manor. Spelling and grammar are very important when trying to get a story across. |
| Fae Child19 2007-07-18 ch 15, | abuseThat's a horrible place to leave us, Mel is a wonderful character. Great story! |
| Sally 2007-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseManner and Manor mean two different things. Manor means spalatial dwelling. I believe that's what you meant but that's not how it came off. That's why proofread is so important. |
| Tommyfan4ever 2007-06-26 ch 14, | abuseGreat story; I hope the Charmed Ones find out who 'Mel' really is before it's too late. |
| aerohead1980 2007-06-18 ch 15, | abuseGreat chapter. |
| DemonessLeader 2007-06-16 ch 15, | abuseI like it but please update quicker this time. |
| Summer Jasmine 2007-06-16 ch 15, | abuseI understand her intentions are good about not telling Chris, but maybe with his help she can cope with it better or something like that. Great work. |
| scme 2007-06-15 ch 15, | abuseabsolutley love this fic! just read all 15 chapters so far! i know it was a while a go but i loved how you did the future epsidoe stuff but added melinda in etc - thought it was relly well done. and now poor melinda is dying! so unfair! hope you update soon! please! |
| crazyDFFgang 2007-06-15 ch 15, | abuseWow... I hope they can help her... (Chrissy.W.x, crazyDFFgang-member) |
| lizardmomma 2007-06-15 ch 15, | abusei think you are doing a wonderful job with the story |
| MissHaunted-MoonLight 2007-06-15 ch 15, | abuseOh dear. Poor Mel. Poor Chris. Poor Future. Brilliant, as usual! Can't wait for more! ^^ Huge hugs, Peanut x X x X x |
| Marcus1233 2007-06-14 ch 15, | abuseSo...I dunno. I just kinda have the feeling the structure is all brittle. It has a strong structure and all, yet, it can break in such a way that it dulls the entire story. You get what I mean? |