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| Kerena Darklight 2006-07-05 ch 2, | abuseOh wow, I really did enjoy this! :D I like the vocabulary you use and things flow despite being a litle choppy but who's perfect? I love it, the plot rocks and I can't wait to read more! |
| PurpleAjah 2006-02-27 ch 2, | abuse'rubberized water' - Love it. Going to remember that because it is so unusual... This is confusing. I like it because I can't predict what will happen next. Please update soon! |
| PurpleAjah 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is hard core stuff. I don't usually read stuff like this in fanfiction, usually just something lighthearted. This is the kind of sci-fiction I love to read in a long novel. You're a good writer! *impressed* Poor Ha'ri is delusional... or not. This is cool. I'm reading on... -Your e-mail buddy |
| Adi 2006-01-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like it. Interesting plot, well-written. THANK YOU for making Akito male. Sniffle. I miss it... Please keep writing! Don't leave us hanging... |
| Winter's Light 2005-12-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseDid I review yet? My computer said that it couldn't find the page when I clicked "Submit Review". Well...if I didn't, then... THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY SO FAR!! I LOVE IT!! *sweet voice* Please update soon or I'll make Hana shock you. ^_^ ~*Winter's Light*~ |