Great... this is the second time I've read this story and I can't believe that I didn't review last time! One quick question... why is X stil there? I thought he only had a few months left... or did he go back to work there...? TTFN!

it's a good idea, it is. You just need to work on a few things. There are many many plot errors, just for one, you said she came to camp in shorts and a tank, and in the end you said she was wearing the same thing, but she was wearing jeans. Things are very brief, there's a lot of shouting, and it doesn't flow. One second she's calm, the next she's shouting. Just work on it. Also, investing a little more time in proof reading would be valuable

OMG! I love your story! It's amazing! I think I'm going to cry!

Good story, you should make a sequel.

This was a really good story. Love it!

yawn, that was boring, you didn't put detail into it. half the time she is in one day and the rest she is in another. you give her no intro to any of her yelling attacks, she warms up to the guys way to fast. if she had been abused like you had made it seem she would have been terrified of the guys. your spelling and grammer sucks. the moron that said you could be a prof. has obviously never read a decent book befor. put more detail and less song/poetry in it.

positively amazing
one of the best damn things I have ever read
awsome

amazing

you write like a perfesional...wheres the sequal?lol

great story!

Such an awesome story... Nice job with it... Yeah... You've left me kinda speechless- which is EXTREMELY hard to do... :)

Dude that was awsome and sad and happy and ... yeah :)

Woah... this is really deep... I LOVE IT!GO YOU!

I have only one thing to say: Camp Green Lake was a boys' camp. It said so in the book. If there were going to be girls involved, it would be an entirely separate camp; unless necessary, the judicial system never mixes genders. She wouldn't have come within two hundred yards of any of the boys.

Overt use of misogyny to create animosity? A bit unlikely. I'd advise a little bit of a brush-up on that.

I liked this story, it was the first Holes Fic I have read. I also liked your song choices.