really enjoying this story...hope even though it has been a while since an update that you might find the plot bunnies to finish it...thx...

please can you finish this. I gotta know the ending

UDPATE QUICKLY! HEARTS THE STORY! BUT WHERE'S GAARA?!

when...is...the...next chapter...CCOOMMIINNGG!

Yay! I love it!! I can't wait for the next chappie. You keep me wanting more. You are very talented. Hope you update soon.

Audrey Rose

NO! I must know what happenes. I can't wait till you update. You're reallt talented. I love this fic.

Audrey Rose

this is too good of a story for you not to update on! i'm totally captivated!

update soon!

The plot is very original, which I like, and everyone is definitely in character. :-) The only problem I have is that you will sometimes forget punctuation, especially after a sentence, and there are lots of run-ons. Also, after you download a chapter you should make sure that there were no loading errors. . . I have that problem a lot, where the computer will delete the space between two words.

The content, though, is great! Update soon!

-Mere Anarchy

hurry up n update already
man ive been waitin for like ever
but it is really good

plz update more
ja

countinue countinue please countinue

what!? NO WAY I WAS THINKING OF DOING A STORYLINE ALONG THE LINES OF THIS...LOL OH WELL IT'S BETTER since you wrote it..lol
well keep the story going don't stop. great job btw

Yea I love it I hope you update soon

That is very good story.. I am impressing with it. haha kakashi kissed sakura!! so cute!! m so sakura will join ANBU but not NA right? That would be unlikely of sakura. lalalala keep going

yay ya updated cool keep up the good work ^_^