Posted 19 February 2011 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critics Two Cents.

TSL en route to Nar Shaddaa: A stolen kiss.

The piece as the name implies concentrates on how Mical's primary enemy, Atton feels about him. The kiss at least changes Atton's tune, afterward, he's happy the other was there, since his presence caused Atton to at least try.

Wow. I'mma late reviewer D:

I roffled at;

"So she does like me. Score!" LOL! Awesome xD. Nice short fic before bedtime.

good!

short but sweet... I liked it )

I agree with the other reviewers, a little more detail can help a story... but this is cool as a oneshot. A nice first fic! )

This is a cute oneshot, not mention my hating Mical gives it a couple of points.

MTFBWY

This is a cute one-shot. :)

I've always loved the Exile/Atton pairing. Who needs Mical, anyway? heh heh...

Keep up the good work.

very cute but a little rushed.i still liked it you just need more detail! great idea though!

However short, it was very well typed. _ props to you!