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Reviews for: Orders and Conflicts
Annie
2008-03-09 . chapter 5
A really good read.It held my interst to the end, especially with Sarge as a main character & injured. Please write more Combat stories.
blarney
2008-01-17 . chapter 1
There are a lot of Combat! stories out there but this is one of the better ones. Write more!
Stormy_rose
2006-10-15 . chapter 5
:D Good story!
canislupus
2006-04-18 . chapter 5
yes another chapter and the end to the adventure. i was a little slow noticing it but I got here. I'm not really sure whata beta is but I'm willing to help if I can. (again I'm not really sure I can)
MnComfan
2006-04-11 . chapter 5
Ah-All the guys are okay and back home. Just the way I like Combat stories to end. There is but one thing I longed for at the end that wasn't there-Saunders chewing out and then thanking, Littlejohn. Thanks for the great story. I look forward to more.
combatcrazy
2006-04-10 . chapter 5
Great finish to a great story. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see more from you soon.
Albert Baker
2006-03-03 . chapter 4
I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. The characters and action are true to the series. You have me anxiously anticipating the next chapter. Please don't take too long finishing Chapter 5!
canislupus
2006-02-27 . chapter 4
yes, another chapter, alls well for a few days. if I had half the intense threatening ability sarge has in this last chapter I think my life would be a dream. I liked the descriptions of each character, the way you point out weaknesses and strengths. (for example the fact that doc was a liability at night, because of his courage on the battlefield) I look forward to ch 5, although i doubt littlejohn is.
combatcrazy
2006-02-27 . chapter 4
Another great chapter. Hope to see Chapter 5 real soon. Love that hurt and comfort stuff- especially if it surrounds my Sarge. Thanks for a great story so far.
Syl
2006-02-26 . chapter 4
What a pleasant surprise--Chapter 4 is up and it's a doozy! I was scared right alongside Littlejohn with every glare and threat Saunders gave him (busted to "ditch digger" had me in stitches!). Great job so far.
combatcrazy
2005-12-28 . chapter 3
Another great chapter. Keep them coming. I love a hurt and comfort story especially if it involves the love of my life Sarge. Thanks.
Syl
2005-12-20 . chapter 2
The big guy is obviously in even bigger trouble with Sarge. Still, he's done a fair job of salvaging the mess he's caused, although leaving the radio behind may not win him any medals--except a Purple Heart after Sarge gets done with him. An excellent follow-on chapter! I'm looking forward to the next.
combatcrazy
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
What a great story. Hope to see the next part soon. Thanks for a great way to end my week.
BBdro
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! Such a good description of Littlejohn! You just can't leave it there though ... I hope the next part will come soon! Well done!

BBDro
Syl
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
Excellent opening! The action flows smoothly, with a definite 'edge-of-your-seat' quality. I look forward to the next installment.
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