man,that was pretty amazing story! KEEP WRITING!

Hahaha, that's a nice ending. I'm happy for Sarah. Who is this friend she's meeting? I want to know or I'll die of curiosity like Alicia!

Okay, so I've been trying to review the past few chapters, but was being weird so I'll pile it all on this review.

I love the pranks! And--just to clarify--Ollie's fifteen and Katie's twelve? Haha, it reminds me of my friend and her boyfriend. He's sixteen and she's thirteen.

Anyway, that was a disturbing thing with Sarah and Marcus. But that little two-faced--grr! Good job with the story!

Wow that was a long review...I don't think I said anything helpful though...

I LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE THIS STORY!
honestly, absolutly genius right here!
amazing.
wow.


keep writing (for like ever),
heyyo

it sounds great! *favs*

I have been reading all of your stories and I love them! This was an awesome story, and I loved all the pranks. I just loved everything! Keep writing!

I would like to say that I love, worship, and respect you. Also, my band directors already know I belong in special ed.

*on practicing marching on blacktop*
Me: *is marching*
Blacktop: *is wet*
Me: *falls down and slides five feet backwards at an angle* *STAYS IN FORM*
Director: *has us stop--eventually* That was good. Grimes... are you okay?
Me: *has blood running down my legs 'cos my gosh darn sophee shorts slid down... other words not pretty* Um... yeah
Director: congratulations for staying in form.
Band: *applauds*
Director: now PLEASE go to the nurse or something.

Um, yeah. Great job! This is definitely one for the favorites!
FM

Ok... I'm one of those annoying people who will review after finishing every chapter currently available to read. So I guess I'm sort of a, what was it, phantom reader?
But anyway. I've never heard of anyone using the term "grandmum" before, seems so weird. Perhaps it's a Scottish thing, but it's not an English thing. I'd know, being English and all.
Also: "Oh, contraire"? Nice example of the way French gets horribly messed-up by English/American etc people. Fairly sure it should be "Au contraire", as that makes sense. "To the contrary", I believe. Pronounced much the same though, which might explain it.

So yeah, minor quibbles.
And I chuckle too. So there :-P
Good story, though it'd be nice to have more of Oliver's viewpoint. Anyway, back to reading...

What's the plot? I must KNOW! My little brother's kicking me off the computer or I would know!)

no! jeremy and katie should not go out! its just wrong dude! i mean come on!

woot! i luv phantom readers! we rok da house! r u from the uk? just wondering cause u seem to kno the lingo. i'm from southern california (not LA thank god) so i have no idea how to speak ukinese. lol.

i think you're insane. 'nough said. oh i almost forgot! you should make katie harry's actual sis! it'd be pretty sweet! and llama like!

katie's in 2nd, she's the second youngest on the team. the twins, alicia, and angelina are in 3rd. ollie's three years older than katie so you've got him right. keep writing its great!

Stop knicking school owned objects like that annoying snitch, especially since he’s a Chaser

isnt he a seeker?

I have one thing to say it wont take to much of your time:

I LOVE IT!

~RoxieWeasley~