 katieszymanski 4/3/12 . chapter 14 Hey me again just thought I'd mention Hermione's middle name is Jean, not Leanne :D |
 katieszymanski 4/3/12 . chapter 13 This is what I thought their ages were: harry is first year, katie is second year, alicia, angelina, fred and george are all third years, and wood is a fifth year. But then you said this was the end of katie's first year. BY THE WAY I have exactly the same first and second name as her! Aha just though I'd mention that :D love the story 3 |
 Unknown 9/6/11 . chapter 1 Alicia, George, Angelina and Fred are all in year 3. You got the rest right. The fic is really good. Keep it up |
 lilaznnerd 4/15/10 . chapter 23That was a hilariously funny list! Except that James really was a Seeker, it's mentioned in the original Harry Potter. |
 lilaznnerd 4/15/10 . chapter 13The ending of this chapter was an excellent recreation of Harry's first Leaving Feast. And I think 12 might be a bit young for a first kiss, don't you think? |
 lilaznnerd 4/15/10 . chapter 8I choked with laughter at the various pranks in this chapter. Well done! |
 lilaznnerd 4/15/10 . chapter 1This chapter is a good opener! Well done!
Angelina is a third year, because the last year she captained was in Order of the Phoenix and she wasn't in the Quidditch team that Harry captained in Half Blood Prince, which had Katie as a Chaser. Alicia wasn't in Harry's team in HBP, but was in Angelina's team in OotP. It is Harry's first since they don't have a Seeker,Fred and George's 3rd since they left in OotP (2 years ahead of Harry). |
 doireallyhavetogiveyoumyname 11/10/08 . chapter 27 man,that was pretty amazing story! KEEP WRITING! |
 imagine everything 7/12/08 . chapter 27Hahaha, that's a nice ending. I'm happy for Sarah. Who is this friend she's meeting? I want to know or I'll die of curiosity like Alicia! |
 imagine everything 7/12/08 . chapter 22Okay, so I've been trying to review the past few chapters, but was being weird so I'll pile it all on this review.
I love the pranks! And-just to clarify-Ollie's fifteen and Katie's twelve? Haha, it reminds me of my friend and her boyfriend. He's sixteen and she's thirteen.
Anyway, that was a disturbing thing with Sarah and Marcus. But that little two-faced-grr! Good job with the story!
Wow that was a long review...I don't think I said anything helpful though... |
 heyyodude 3/29/08 . chapter 27I LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE THIS STORY!
honestly, absolutly genius right here!
amazing.
wow.
keep writing (for like ever),
heyyo |
 Broken Gold 2/17/08 . chapter 28it sounds great! *favs* |
 Grassy Leaves 1/5/08 . chapter 28I have been reading all of your stories and I love them! This was an awesome story, and I loved all the pranks. I just loved everything! Keep writing! |
 FallenMystery 6/20/07 . chapter 27I would like to say that I love, worship, and respect you. Also, my band directors already know I belong in special ed.
*on practicing marching on blacktop*
Me: *is marching*
Blacktop: *is wet*
Me: *falls down and slides five feet backwards at an angle* *STAYS IN FORM*
Director: *has us stop-eventually* That was good. Grimes... are you okay?
Me: *has blood running down my legs 'cos my gosh darn sophee shorts slid down... other words not pretty* Um... yeah
Director: congratulations for staying in form.
Band: *applauds*
Director: now PLEASE go to the nurse or something.
Um, yeah. Great job! This is definitely one for the favorites!
FM |
 DementedLeaf 3/31/07 . chapter 18Ok... I'm one of those annoying people who will review after finishing every chapter currently available to read. So I guess I'm sort of a, what was it, phantom reader?
But anyway. I've never heard of anyone using the term "grandmum" before, seems so weird. Perhaps it's a Scottish thing, but it's not an English thing. I'd know, being English and all.
Also: "Oh, contraire"? Nice example of the way French gets horribly messed-up by English/American etc people. Fairly sure it should be "Au contraire", as that makes sense. "To the contrary", I believe. Pronounced much the same though, which might explain it.
So yeah, minor quibbles.
And I chuckle too. So there :-P
Good story, though it'd be nice to have more of Oliver's viewpoint. Anyway, back to reading... |