 Red X 2009-10-10 . chapter 22 Hey, how long. The history is good but you could be more carefull with the grammar, and not centralize all the paragraphs. And in some lines is difficult to know who is talking. Please continue. |
 VFSNAKE 2009-10-10 . chapter 22WOW! I wish you weren't so rough with Superman and Wonder Woman. I mean...I'm a big fan of the pairing so its not easy to read the two of them fighting. Will evil demon Raven have Nightwing bound to a crucifix symbol of Trigon when the others arrive to fight her? I can see that and she's trying to convert her love to her side and he's refusing. That would be awesome! |
 Mexican Hinata 2009-08-13 . chapter 21This is a very good story but there are so many grammer errors. For example there are a lot of "is" where there shouldn't be any. But please continue and update soon! :D |
 Darth Sanctus 2009-07-05 . chapter 21This is a good story and I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Unfortunatley you have many spelling and gramatical errors that take away from the story and sometimes make it hard to read. I suggest that you re-read each chapter before you post it and make sure that there are no errors. One of your most frequent mistakes goes like this. You write "Robin is bike" instead of it being "Robin's bike". |
 TeenTitans4ever 2009-06-21 . chapter 21 Another great chapter! Please continue. An don´t forget The Chosen. |
 Red X 2009-06-17 . chapter 21 Hello again! This history keeps turning better! The fight between the heroes is awesome! Who will win? Batman´s group or Superman´s? I think the old Titans would be back to help, but is okay. Please keep updating this and the Chosen. |
 VFSNAKE 2009-06-15 . chapter 21Go chapter. I don't like Superman fighting against Wonder Woman since I'm a big SupermanxWonder Woman fan. So don't be too rough on them. |
 TeenTitans4ever 2009-05-10 . chapter 20 Cool! Batman faces the League! I really like the Bruce/Diana pairing. What about Robin and Raven? They don´t show up in this chapter. Please continue this and The Choosen. |
 Batman Beyond 2009-05-09 . chapter 20 Wow! How long man! I´m happy you´re back. So, that was what happened to Jinx? Creepy! I´m dying for see Batman x Superman! Please update soon. Thanks! |
 VFSNAKE 2009-05-08 . chapter 20YAY! Good chapter. I wish it didn't come to this between the League. I'm a SMxWW person myself. Write more ASAP! |
 Capt H.M Murdock 2009-02-19 . chapter 19Sweet story.hope you'll update soon! |
 shadow uzumaki 2008-12-31 . chapter 8Dude, seriously, work on your spelling, and your dialogue, and your wording. Use a dictionary or go to . This story would be a whole lot better if you clean up your sentences. |
 Batman Beyond 2008-12-17 . chapter 19 The history is getting better and better! So, the Titans (old and new)will face the Justice League? Would be a great battle!Please keep writing, ans don´t forget the chosen. |
 Red X 2008-12-15 . chapter 19 Wow, even the League shows up, this is getting good! Robin will fight them for Raven? He will become Nightwing now? Please don´t stop to update. |
 VFSNAKE 2008-12-15 . chapter 19Interesting. Certainly worth looking into. Write more ASAP! |