Nice ending. Wow, that was really great. You have the characters down pat, honey! And you're an awesome writer. I'm so glad you wrote a sequel :)

I know, I know, I'm about a year late, but I must say this:
1. First off, you are an extraordinary writer.
2. Second, although it was too short for my liking (I like long fics), it had plenty of CWDA, and it had awesome Latin. Next time, though, go more into the Charlie Whumping Don Angst, instead of lightly skimming it.
3. Third, you are an extraordinary writer (did I say that already?)

--SMARTALIENQT :)

I just found this story I just wanted wanted to let you know that i really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Wow, Whitney...this was absolute awesomeness! I loved every line of this 'story', lol. (in case you were wondering, this is your old buddy Joe). Not nearly as good as KotS, but still a great one. Stay in touch, will ya?

p.s.- Nothing really needs to be changed in this, for its awesome. you accurately described in 5 chapters what most people would need 10 or more chapters to do. Great job!

Aw that was awesome! Great job! This and the other one were so good. Write more soon!

Nice write.
Thanks for finishing--and just in time for me to read before I leave the internet world for a few weeks!

Finally! *grins* But it was worth the wait, as your fics are absolutely perfect. Now I just hope that another is in the works. (makes puppy dog eyes) Pretty please?

Applause, applause! I bow to you who wrote this tale. You'd think the actual shows would do stuff this good, but I've yet to see it (unless it's happening to a character I don't like X(. Ain't that always the way)

Very good! Wow - I'm very impressed with Charlie! Thanks for posting!

Great job! I like the ending! :)

:):):) yay!! :):):) perfect ending for a really great fic!:) issues resolved, charlie alive, don emotionally alive... couldn't have asked for a better conclusion!:) great work!:):)

Bravo! Well done!

this story started out so great. I read your other one and then started to read the second one and then nothing. I am so hoping you continue with this one. I know life can get in the way and get very busy and I am just hoping you will find time soon to update. Your writing is really good and I hope you don't just let this story drop like so many others do.

Maybe now that it's summer, you'll have time to finish this totally thrilling story. I am jonesing for the ending. Don needs to kick some butt and Charlie needs his brother to come get him. Please finish soon. We're all on pins and needles.
kateznuf

Ahh! You are planning on updating in the near-future, right? Because that is one heck of a cliff-hanger, and it was very cruel of you to leave us poor readers like this.