 Deep Blue Dragon 5/20/06 . chapter 2aw that made my cry they were so mean to naruto |
 Blankmind 3/18/06 . chapter 2 heh...its a good story bit i gotta say that the quote "belive it" is very very VERY stupid he never ever says it in the manga or the anime he only says that in the U.S verson and in the real manga i dont think anyone even says "belive it" on exess your story is funny but please please never have him say belive it again it ruins your story to say the least! plz for all the die-hard naruto fans out there if u think u could im not trying to tell you how to write er type your story but i think it wold improve it if u did and rember I AM ALSO KNOWN AS SODA MWA HAHAHAHHAHAHA "cough cough"... |
 Dan-Chan Haru-San 3/7/06 . chapter 2L M A O... NICE CHAPTER XD! COME ON UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! |
 Roxxors 3/3/06 . chapter 2XD HAHA i feel SO bad for poor Nari-kun... Hehe big Naruto fangirl so ya Well update soon, id LOVE to read more!...por, por Nari-kun... |
 KakashisGirls 1/21/06 . chapter 1Oh, write more! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! This is so hilarious. I especially loved "She (I) poked her (my) head in the door (door)". The door thing made me laugh so hard! This is awesome. *Chanting* SEQUEL! SEQUEL! |
 Kratos42 12/12/05 . chapter 1Great! Update quickly! _ |
 Roxxors 12/9/05 . chapter 1YAY! YOU CREATED A NEW STORIE! lol, well good chappie, im gonna start reading this...like i read about 20 of your OTHER ficcies...lol. Well anwyay, nice chappie, im SO glad you created another story! bye now, update soon!
-Animelover45 |
 SAMPSON12187 12/9/05 . chapter 1update soon! |
 Dan-Chan Haru-San 12/9/05 . chapter 1Ah yes, this is a very good fic! lol! I love it! update soon! Itd be really funny if naruto got stuck in the sexy jutsu and had to adapt to a female-like lifestyle lol. but anyway, cant wait for an update! |
 Micky Haishan 12/9/05 . chapter 1 Interesting, but you sould really try to watch some of the Japanese anime. It'll change your perspective on the show. Find full length episodes on |
 ihateyou 12/9/05 . chapter 1 see the japanese version before you go spouting out fake naruto phrases TT' |
 The Violent Tomboy 12/9/05 . chapter 1Okay, shadow clone jutsu is really kage buushin no jutsu, Naruto doesn't say 'believe it', which is damn annoying, although he does say 'dattebayo' often, but not every few lines...Kakashi, well, the book he reads is Icha Icha Paradise, which is filled with pictures of 'explicet scenes'. Well, start reading the manga at least, it's up to Naruto's first match in the chuunin exams in Shonen Jump. But don't get me wrong, I think your idea for this story is really good. I'll keep an eye on this, I'll think it'll go nicely. And go to for character profiles since you're new to this, or and type in Naruto. |
 Clark Cradic 12/9/05 . chapter 1 Really funny! I love the Sexy Jutsu! Just promise me one thing, you will NOT make this fic a yaoi. For some reason when ever someone makes the Sexy Jutsu the main thing in the story, it's always yoai. Anyway update soon! |