THAT WAS SO TOTALLY AWESOME!

Update soon! :D

Nice song...

Good chapter! Come up with another song soon!

good poem i liked it!

This is a nice song. Have you thought of putting together a small disk of songs? I bet it would be nice.

Ooh...this does sound very catchy. Wish I could actually hear it! LOL. I'm very positive it would stuck in my head for days on end. Or maybe it wouldn't be stuck there until a few months later...that happens often. Anyway, I really enjoyed it. I'm impressed you can rhyme that well and still keep a nice beat going. Your good. LOL. :)

-Samantha

Um, OHOH WHEN YOU GET OLDER YOU SHOULD WORK IN A MUSIC COMPANY AND WRITE THE SONGS FOR THE SINGERS! really, I am sure that singers would sing the songs that you write(I would) anyways, great chapter!!

Until next time
PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU READ MY FIC!!

:.*Ashley*.:

Nice.

*sighs*

THAT WAS SO SWEET!

Aww, this kinda sould sad! Poor Cindy!

oh

that was cool

good poem!please keep updating!

Ooh...nice. And it just seems so, er, I'm not quite sure how to put this, so bare with me: It seems so anti-V-Dayish that it's actually V-Dayish? I don't know, LOL.

I really like the chorus, and the very first 2 lines. LOL.

-Samantha

That was...excellent I think that this is the best angsty song that I have read, good job

Untill next time
Write more soon

:.*Ashley*.:

*Sniff* that was so sad, BUT it was very good. Your other songs were great too, this one was the *sigh* saddest of all...

Untill next time

:.*Ashley*.:
PS: Please write more soon and you should become a song writer in the future...wait, you are already a song writer...