this is one crazy story...i mean imagine losing your virginity to the guy who becomes your stepbrother...creepy...

hey claudine

well, yeah, im sure u were on caffeine at the time u wrote this...but hats off to caffeine, coz this fic was rocking!

PGP

HAHA! That last line cracked me up! Kinda sad about Paul's parents but I know it was the point

Emm

I LOVED IT! you should write more

LOL!

the last line is HILARIOUS!

That ending...Not expected, lol.

Awesome though!

Woah... that was really wierd. . BUT KEWL! MWEHAHAHAHAHA! THAT WAS FLIPPING AWESOME!

ah no, Finaly someone writes a very good story that has Paul and Suze luff that may I point out was very good, but hten have that kind of an ending. how could you. oh well this is very very good and you should really think about writing more to it, like have Jack move up and have...I dunno just have what happenes to Paul and Suze. I have a question for you though, Why is Paul happy because at the end you have 'This brought a little smile to Paul’s face, “You hear that, Suze?”' so why was he smiling because this is bad news.

please writre more-I know you said that this was just a one-shote but it is so very good

luv Suze

wait...this is a one shot? SO NOT FAIR...UGH! ANOTHER CHAPTER POR FAVOR

well, that was a nice way to end it that's for sure!

And paulie said the "a" word.

Anal.

Tee hee *laughs behind hand* now i've said it. mwahahaha. So obviously suze and Paul aren't, you know, going to connect at any point in the future obviously.

Because i read somewhere that it's illegal.

Newhoos, i thought it was funny. Nice one.

Sarah xoxo

Hey Great fanfic! I found it very funny! especially at the end! Will you make it into a NOT oneshot? If you are Update soon i really wanna know what happens next!

That is just too twisted for words. Wow, you're really on a P/S roll, aren't you? :D

good story! update soon!

aw, i totally luvd it apaprt 4rm da step brother bit!

Oh, my Gosh.

My Gosh, oh.

Gosh my, oh.

Gosh, oh my.

Oh My God!

that was...OMG!

it was cute, but naughty. (::grins::)

Hei, I'll be kinda *busy this week so I cant reply yet.

I'm just sneaking around. so Sshh!

Why was Paul happy that she and Suze will be step siblings?

(when I typed busy, I accidentaly typed bust! haha)

I really dont think you need to know that.

It was cute and "It's crazy all right"