I can't believe Misty almost left. Why couldn't Ash just tell Misty he cares about her a lot.

True, rewrites of “Misty Meets Her Match” aren’t uncommon, but I liked how this story puts a more masterful touch to the overused idea. Undoubtedly, the best part about this fanfic is the romantic drama; it is very good, detailed, and pulls a generous amount of heartstrings from the reader (especially where Ash is concerned). Although Misty’s ending resolution was somewhat predictable, it was still quite cute, and made me smile and go “aaw.” Honestly, I don’t usually like Trovita re-writes, but this story is an exception for me, so good job.

love the story misty is so cool a/m those are the ones i like best

Aw! That is so sweet! You are just so talented! Aw...I really can't say anything else.

another great story!

Loved the story, since it was full of delicious angst. Mhm angsty!

I only wish that Misty stayed with Rudy, or that she wasn't able to catch up with him fast enough. But then again, I'm probably one of the few people who love unhappy endings. D

I liked this. Good emotions. But...the end was a bit choppy. I like the last line, but it doesn't quite fit as a last line. It seems like you cut of part...But I still like it. It's different than anything else I've seen _ All in all, I'm giving it a big thumbs up! _

Ahhhh, sweet. Now here's MY rewrite of the end of your fic.

-As the two reached back on to Lapras, Rudy's motorboat opened up to reveal double gatling guns.

"DIE ASH! DIES MISTY! I LOVED YOU BUT YOU BETRAYED ME!"

Ash brings out pikachu. Rudy reveals to be James and Jesse was the little sister. Pikachu sends Rudy blasting off. Hooray.

not bad, but then again I'm not into the whole Ash and Misty thing. I'm more for team Rocket, but it was pretty good. :)

Nice story. I felt really bad for Ash when he left.

That was fab! i loved it so much! Great story. Excellent actually. best AAML fic in the world. Great job. You expressed both Ash and Misty's feelings really well. _

::wipes away tears:: heh, stupid me, here I am, crying over your fanfic. It was just so sweet... the ending, though, was somewhat disapointing, it ended too short but other than that ::wipes away fresh tears again:: it was very touching, and incredibly sweet... I loved it... absolutely... ::sniffles:: I feel like a fool... this story is just... too good... you really have to make more... ::sobs:: aw...there I go again..

*cries* THAT'S SO BEAUTIFUL! *sniff* I love that . . . SO ROMANTIC! *.* (omg, I sound like Misty . . .) LOL Anyway, such a sweet fic! Keep it up!

Very kawaii!

Awww! I love this so much. How sweet. Poor Ash. Not to sound sadistic, but he's such a doll when he cries...