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Reviews for: Within a Heartbeat
janice
2007-10-27 . chapter 1
plz update
this story is so good its killing me to not know the ending
Moonlit Secret
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! and MORE! please hurry up and write the next chapter! this one was fantastic. there are so few Odd and Aelita fans out there and i have been dying to read a story about the two of them so please write the next chapter, like soon. if you don't i could die of suspence!
haha
anyway, great job

Moonlit Secret
moneybabe
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
please update soon! it's sweet how Odd is with her! XD so far, so good!
The Halfa Wannabe
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
Interesting.
Miyu Mira
2005-12-12 . chapter 1
CODE LOCOCO! (made up hee hee)
Blood Red Sharingan
2005-12-10 . chapter 1
More! More! More! That was great!
Starfiregirl5671
2005-12-10 . chapter 1
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE THIS IS GETTING GOOD
Give'em Hell
2005-12-10 . chapter 1
Me like the story. It already seems planed out nice (if you know what I mean) I hope you update soon! I'm already dying to read more! ^_^ update soon please!

The Best Agent in the World,

~AGENTTITANIUM
zealot
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP WRITE MORE

JUS 2 LET U KNOW I WORK FOR CL IN FRANCE AND SEASON 3 AND 4 ARE GOING WELL BUT BAD NEWS MY COMPUTER FOR ANIMATING THE CHARCTS IN LYOKO JUST CRASHED! but there will be alot of outside fighting and the renult factoy blowing up du to some crates of C4 plastics LOL
Cold-Foxx
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
OA-ness...Lovin' it. This will be on my faves^^ But one problem: At the beginning, Odd was lying in the grass, but then he's in his room, on his bed. Did I just misread or is it a mistake? But whatever it is, it's small, and it's still a great story! Update soon!

With hopes of you updating,
Kitty
TazortheYoot
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, Nii-san! This story is very well written and you have all of them in character as well! Great start! Update soon!
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