you should make more this is really good.

I really, really, REALLY hope you haven't forgotten this one :c

A plot was just coming into being, and.. Well... it's worth continuing... pretty please? c:

I will review five million times if you will please update! It's been forever, and I need more...

I love your fanfic Roxanne, it's so well written. But u have to continue it!! I need to know what happens to Ed and Roy :3 I was reading the last part at work (cause I was wating for something to do) and just giggled like a little girl when Envy started to rape Ed :P so hawt

Kya! What happens next?! I wanna know! Please please update!

I just found this fic today and read all 6 chapters. I've really gotten into it. I hope there are plans to continue the story.

OMG! I LURVE ENVY! XD HE AN ED GO AS WELL AS ROY AN ED! but unfortunately, ther rnt nearly enuf gd EnvyEd fics... *sighs mournfully* but u no wot? evn tho envy raped my poor lovely ed in this chappie, he shood SO end up falling in love with him! but ed will (of course) choose roy XD... * looks around at everyone giving disgusted looks* ...sorry... :(. gd fic, keep it up! ^^ * skips jauntily away to randomly ramble to some other poor soul*

YAY FOR ENVY RAPE. =O I love your story, its fantastic. Al is so cute in this! He's totally Uke. xD I adore it, and I shall continue reading it until the end. I love you. I love Whore!Ed and I love Roy. Hooray.

-Jori

gripping...need more

yer writing has a wonderful flow and the descriptions are marvelous. plus this has a nice plot! luv it!

Fucking sexy dude. Post more!! envy = sexy rapist


~spiritfoxgirl~

Awesome
i usually dont like this kind of stuf
but i LOVE this
the plotlines SO AWESOME
when is the next chapter coming out?

WooT.
UpDate?

No...cliffhangers. This is getting interesting. I must continue on...

Ooh, I like the flowing words. They string together very nicely. I am liking this so far.