Oh my gosh! You made me want to cry - which means you wrote this brilliantly! It's so poetic to picture all of those small children huddled together reciting the Jedi Code, only to have them meet their end by the one Jedi who was never able to truly accept the Code. Its so tragic! I love this story though, nice work :)

A great story. Very good.

Wow that was just perfect. So full of fear and yet confidence. Just great.

lovely poignant fic. really good.

Wow! That as so touching. And how they just reciting the code. Ah! So sad. Realy gives off the feeling of doom.