You made Kai incredibly funny in that esp. when he froze in bed ohh and chocolate covered...? ever thought about doing a sequel?
But erm not hersey cuz dont hershey bars taste terrible or so ive heard??

First off...*sigh* Kyaa... I am so happy. So. Inconceivably. Happy!! This is the first Tyka ficcie I read with internet. *hugs it* IT'S SO CUTE!

Tyson trying to get Kai to do something he doesn't want to do... ajd there's chocolate involved. This is what it's all about, man! *pumps fist*

*happy sniff* Everything in this fic made me go, "YAY!!" Kai's thoughts on Tyson... beautiful, wonderful, lovely... *flips through thesaurus*

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*chucks it* There's no words to describe!! Except, maybe... I LOVE IT, I LOVE YOU! (Is such a squealing fangirl, but o wells \^^/)

/^^\ -^^- \^^/ -^^- \^^/ -^^- \^^/!! There! You have just witnessed my smiley dance of joy!

*skips happily away*

ooh - St. Tyson -winks- lol
i LOVE the opening sentence: "I'm a Hershey bar!" that just made me stop and laugh lol
brill story! arigato!! -grins-
where DO you get your ideas from? -grins- keep it coming! XD

Dragonfly
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*Smirk * Nah, I like it -just- fine. *Blushes * My mind has a darker side and I'm sure you can tell. XD

So, there I was. I had work in five minutes, then I had to study for Chemistry. I just randomly decided to check my email, and I saw that you wrote some stories! I screamed, literarly, "YES!" People in the computer labed stared. I got a few, "SH!" to which I answered, "Ah, bite me." I printed this puppy out and tucked it in my notebook. After work (last week is always killer), I said, I'll read five minutes, study fifteen. Yeah. Didn't work that way. Read the whole thing, study! Stop, re-read, study. Stop, and the vicious cycle went on and on for about three hours! Any way, point to fact, awesome story, my friend! A little risque, maybe, but still funny as hell (though, how can Hell be funny...moving on) I loved the relationship between Kai and Tyson! They are so contrasting,but so good for each other! Loving it! Also, your manner of writing. You have the best diction ever! I love the adverbs, nouns, adjectives! "Halloween arrived..." to "accusing and cold." Awesome exposition! I loved it! If I have never told you this,I want to tell you again! You are such a great writer! Keep writing, my friend! Now, I have to go email you!

Becks

P.S. I loved the Max and Ray part where Kai left! So Kai, so them! Loving it!

That was delictable sweet, Divey. ^_^ I loved the way that Kai got all embarassed over the things that Tyson did. It was cute. And we should all know by now that when it comes to Tyso, Kai will never be in control. And its more fun that way. XD I hope your write more little one-shots like this, I'm gonna be needing them.

Hahahaha lol!! I just adored the image of a sleepy frustrated Kai rolling around Tyson in a hersey bar costume. Loved it!

I finally know what I want for my birthday.
TYSON IN A CHOCOLATE SUIT!
Now, to explain that to my mom...
As ever, you are uber-cool, and totally original. I mean, this was a complete squeefest! Heh, Tyson is so devious, muttering naughty things...ooh, I've got the giggles now.
...and good luck with those midterms!
*coughsVimescoughsIknowyoursecretcoughs*

cute, i really like it. you should do a sequal to this, its really cute. well, i gtg, laterz!

hehe that so amusing! i love Tyson in this, he's so flirty! lol!
Liah xx

aw that was so cute I love it update it soon

xD lol
you should continue this! have Kai covered in chocolate! *drools*

Hehe, I loved it, Keep up the good work

what a cute little story^^)
Very nice!