Wow, that's something there! No need to be so pessimistic. Hmm, and here I am trying to cheer you up when I'm the one who's pessimistic too. Anyways, it was a nice but sad fic. How would Luffy have reacted...and who IS the father anyway?

Aw. ;__; This story made me a bit teary eyed. So sad yet so beautiful. I wonder what Luffy's reaction would be if he sees Luffy junior. I think that would be a wonderful so touching. X3 I hope you write more stories like this.

You should continue more with this

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Luffy and Nami forever.

yea i would smile too your good

It's like Eastenders. When Dennis is dead despite the fact he dosen't know Sharon's preganant. 9 months later, she gives birth to Dennis Junior. How about a sequel. Do you think you'll name Nami's son Luffy Junior?

first of all, i have to say i just love all ur stories in the one shot series ^^! i like how each charater has their own unique problems after Luffy dies. good job on all of them!

i thought this one shot was so sad yet so sweet ^^. hope to see more of your writing soon!

so sweet

Why did you say this was bad? I'm mean, you could make it longer or somethin' but it's actually really good! Isulting your own work makes it sound like you don't like it! wait... does that make sense? never mind! i'm just a crazy person! Move along! Nothin' to see here!

Now really stop being so ** yourself...it really doesn't matter what other people think as long as what you write makes you happy...but I really enjoyed the whole Nami X Luffy pairing...it was very sad too.

Oh, wow. This is.. dark, intense, exciting, and heart-wrenching at the same time. It feels like a fragment of a bigger and longer fic, but the atmosphere of the story is there, right there. You've captured the moment very well. I love this to bits.

I think its really good. I wish it was more than a one shot..more like a five shot...xD...Very nice.

It is the most tender fic I have read in long time! I really like the fact that Sanji consoles Nami even though he know that she is in love with Luffy (and poor Luffy ... has died sob sob. But soon the strawhat pirates will receive a Chibi-Luffy!! (how cute!!)). I enjoyed reading it! Congratulations!!

PD: I´m spanish so forgive my bad english and mistakes

That was sad, but overall, that was a good one shot.

so sad! how did luffy die? What happens next?