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| oxoxEnchantedxoxo 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThat. Was. Amazing. I LOVED IT! |
| SerenityIsHeaven808 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuse...Wow. This was very well written, very descrpitive as well. You are like a professional author or something...I LOVED IT!.Heh heh. |
| signed x laura 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseoh...my god. that was the most amazing one-shot in the history of forever. i was definitely bawling somewhere near the end, that was so perfect. i love this :] |
| Slothy Girl 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseloved it to pieces! |
| oreoxlove4ever 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusegreat! 10/10 =D |
| brakken 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. It might have been a bit sappy and dramatic at times, but I enjoyed it all the same. Sometimes sap can be very appropriate. And the wisdom of children with relationships is one of my favorite themes-thank you for including it! I think the last scene was my favorite by far-she's eighteen, for the sake of all that is holy, she just got him to admit that he's in love with her-she shouldn't stick to just the sweet little pecks on the cheek. It's unrealistic and silly and (might as well be frank about it) frustrating to poor readers like myself. You got me worried there for a while, can you tell? You fixed it in the end though. Nice job overall. |
| jasmine lotus 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusewow! ^_^ . I don't think anyhting I going to say will do the story justice so just... WOW!! |
| Polka Dots and Moonbeams 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseDear dolphingirl0113, Outstanding fanfic! I can certainly tell why it won an award. I love the details you added into it, and I abosulutely LOVE your plot. What a clever idea to make Inuyasha's reincarnation appear in this story. It's certainly original!! The way you incorporated Inuyasha's emotions into the story was perfect! It seemed like you portrayed him all the way down to the very last nerve. Excellent work! Love, Lil' Lemon |
| s. nimhrodell 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseUwah! So sweet. Gave me quite a sugar buzz! Love it. |
| inukag.lover19 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is awesome! You made Inuyasha feel exactly how Kagome feels he everytime he goes off to that bitchy kinky-ho. I love the idea, I really enjoyed it! ^_^ =) |
| Shirou Hana 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWow this was so beautiful! I loved it so much! I never really got to like Kisho, perhaps i feel the same way as Kagome somehow with him being a sort of second Inuyasha. That doesnt feel quite right. God i laughed so much when they all played in the snow. Somehow that scene of utter happiness between them all made me so happy inside i couldnt help it. Thank you so much You brightened my day more than you can imagine :) So finally Inuyasha 'dumps' Kikyo. Well im sorry but i really think it was about time. Heh and Shippo seems to be the brightest one in the :D OOh i could spill so many words of how i feel about this fic but it would fill several pages. God this has got to be one of the best Inuyasha fics i've never read. Thank you so much. And its pretty obvious im faving it isnt it? Everything is perfect in this fic after all... Arigatou gozaimasta! ^^ ~Shirou Hana |
| Raemii Brokenlocket 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseaw! |
| girl 2007-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewow you wrote such a sweet story and it was so creative how you had inuyasha have a reincarnation. i loved it! |
| Kipcha 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love that story and I ADORE it when Miroku, Sango and Shippou ambush the pair! |
| w0ah 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abusethis is my most favorite one shot Ive ever read! |