:0) Made me smile lots. Thanks so much!

Wow, nice story : )

LOL Ninja shuriken tag... sounds exciting! I'd, of course, be dead within the first few seconds but hey! It's definitely a cool game!
Awesome story! I'm sad that it's a one-shot but it's exceptionally well written, so I'm not too sad. :D

This was a really neat story! it is an interesting take on friendship and relationships :) I really enjoyed it!

I really liked it - very cute. But I think you made a little error near the end: it says 'Kakashi's face brightened into a beatific grin...' But I don't recall him ever taking his mask off. Or was I not reading carefully enough...?

(Also, it's spelt beautific.)

AHAHA! This was glorious! It was funny and clever and adorable and I loved it! Really awesome story!

I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it (dies from cuteness and fluff)

this story is the BEST!

amazing! thank you

This is brilliant! I loved it. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

Bizarrley amusing, keep it up!

Yeah!KakaIru goodness!

Well...
I absolutley adore all your stories. I'm reviewing this one because I'm lazy. Those stories about genma and Rai-chan...I love the slug one. And this one. And all of them. I love how you write about characters with a small role, because there is so much room for imagination. I enjoy reading about their everyday life...drinking, playing tag...wearing high heels. :) It's so cool how you show the relationship between the characters. I love the romance of gen/rai and kaka/iru and the friendship between the couples. It's just too cute. You're an amazing writer. And you know people. The psychology of each character is great. And that they are mostly oneshots, but they can be interconnectable...like just segments out of their lives. I hope you will write more! I'll probably check back like everyday.
Well...just keep up the good work! This is amazing!

--Nonoka

X3 That made me laugh and grin~ Great great story, playful with a sweet twist

I wish this wasn't a oneshot T-T
Its so awesome!

This was a darling fic! I loved it!