You should definately expand on this. It's a great start

This was really really good, i cant wait for the next chapter!

I hope you have a good day, C-Ya!

Whoa Cel, that was deep! I like how you wrote Buffy as a vampire. Usually she's written with a soul, but you wrote her without one, and yet she still cared for her friends. I also like how you had her thinking about killing her pitiful father, but then I'm warped . Oh yeah, she still planned to carry on with her duties. Go Buffy! Love your writing, girl!

awesome!

I don't know what else to say. Awesome! :)