It's been so long since I cried reading a fanfic actually it was a year ago when I loved Ren and only Ren, I love Uchiha Sasuke now but it's not all about him I love Naruto nii-chan too which is the reason why I hate SasuNaru.
I didn't like Horo X Ren back then but I still read fanfics, anyway now I don't love Ren anymore I've started to see that other than Anna X Yoh and Lyserg X Jeanne it's likely to happen from what I've seen in the anime and I can't help liking it.
P.S. If you ever want ideas for anything to do with Naruto give me a call and I'd be happy to help ok, so keep that in mind when you want to write anything to do with it.

Gah! He's too evil! >_

Haha, I was just thinking, are'nt they shamans? But then Ren pops up and... ^_^ By the way, what's that song? It sounds familliar... :S

omg aw

I've actually wanted to find this story again after a long while... coz the last time I read it, I couldn't review. Now i could, and I wanted to say, this was such a heartbreaking piece. Good work!

^^ very nice!

CONGRATULATIONS LYSHA!
Girl, I'm so proud of you and you should be proud of yourself too. I mean, it is so hard to keep a story going for a whole year and still make sure to keep it exciting. You kept me at the edge of my chair for almost a year without being able to figure out what was going on until the very end of it and for that you have all my respect and admiration.
The ending was worth waiting and it just HAD to be this way, I mean, they had to say good bye to each other properly. You pictured everything just perfect.
Troughout this story I felt that I connected to you somehow and I really appreciate that. I also want to thank you for reading my reviews and responding them. You showed you really cared about what people thought about your story and it was obvious with every chapter that you tried your best to improve every time.
Thanks for making me enjoy this fandom and finally thanks for making this story, I truly enjoyed it beyond belief

Shattered biggest fan says goodbye...

Read ya´later

yay! what a good story. I've been waiting forever for this chapter!! i still don't understand the "good ren, Bad ren" thing but that's okay. good job!

About time! XD

Anyway, I think this was an excellent ending to the story. It's hard to bring closure to a story about the death of someone's lover that's based on a fandom about people coming back as ghosts, but you managed to do it well. The whole chapter - the funeral scene including all the Chinese traditions, the monologue, and the ending - all blended together to create almost a surreal effect, and it was a very satisfying conclusion to the story; it seemed like it really wrapped the whole thing up. Overall, superb job, on both the chapter and the whole story! I can't wait for your next one. :D

Woahm what a surround ending. I have no idea of chinese funerals myself, but that was very convising. I loved this chapter, as I did your story. A years work well done, congratulations on your finishing this wonderful story, it was truley a great read. I enjoyed it throughorly, and I intend to probably read through it atleast twice more before I go offline tonight. Well done, on an exelent ending!
Good luck with your future projects.
Until then!

i can understand why you would work on it for so long, its so complicated. i had to go back a few times to really get it. but i understand, i really do, and i think it makes a whole lot of sense and the explaination isnt disappointing at all. i think there would have to be a really creative mind to brew up an idea like this, and a really great writer to get it down in words that makes sense for another person. good thing that both are in one person, you =)

actually, i think i CAN follow and uderstand. it not only seems to make sense crystal clearly. it also just connects everything, makes sense of all the mysteries...
honestly, i could slap Horo for...not understanding Ren. but i can understand why he was doing that, plus its not like he is Ren. he cant understand /everything/ about him. and Ren, its so frickin hard to put in words what i feel about what he did. it was unfaithful, but a lot of couples act in unfaithfulness. that doesnt mean their love isnt real tho.
anyways, enough of my rambling. im gonna go to the next chapter.

great chapter by the way. sad and upseting, but very well written with details and emotions

OMG, after 12 glorious chapters I finally know what the hell was going on! *dances around like the idiot she is*
Yeah, that theory makes sense to me now *sighs in relief for the first time in 8 months and 16 days, thanks to you XD* I wonder why I didn't think of it before. I feel that the twist you gave to the story is amazing, and it should have been difficult to post, because usually the last 2 chapters of the story could ruin or improve it, but you definitely improved it. Congratulations for this excellent chapter and I'll be waiting eagerly for the next one. *shattered's biggest fan waves and runs away while jumping from joy*

Read ya' later

*GAH* the suspense! I hope you update soon! This is such a good story! ^^

~LEMON wine

I couldn't help it. XD

This chapter was definitely interesting. It was certainly different from what I expected, but I wouldn't say that's bad. It's definitely plausible - It seems like it didn't quite fit with the rest of the story, but it certainly makes sense, and I think you handled it in the best possible way. This chapter ties together everything that's happened so far very nicely.

Again, this chapter was very well-written; the transitions between different parts of the story have been excellent throughout the whole story, and this chapter is no exception. I also love the metaphors throughout your work; they make it much more interesting.

I wish I could think of something useful to say, but I couldn't find anything to suggest no matter how hard I looked. XD But I can't wait until you're done with the final chapter! I dunno if it would be too much to hope for for it to be done by the time I get back. XD Good luck!