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Reviews For: Something In The Water

arosestear
2008-06-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww I loved this story.^^ It was cute and well writen, I hope you'll continu to write stories (not just about Foster btw). You're good. :>

There should be more Wilt/Eduardo fluff around here, honestly.
Loren
2007-04-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was too cute and the ending was very funny! I loved it! Hmm... I wonder if you have more...
Puppy
2006-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis story was very cute. I love this story and the other Wilt/Eduardo story. Heart melting! Write more.
Wega the blue sun
2006-08-13
ch 1,
abuseI wish this story was poorly written, full of grammatical mistakes and spelling errors. I also wish it was unimaginative and graphically obscene, because if it were all those loathsome things it would be easier for me to dismiss it. Wilt and Eduardo are such innocent creatures that it bothers me to even think of them harboring such thoughts as are put out in the story. Eduardo is the sweet natured purple ogre with the mind of a three year old, and I can't see Wilt as you portray him. Why is there so much W/E fluff? I don't get it. Still, you did a good job at a story I didn't like. How's about you turn your talents to a non fluff, non slash Ed story? I'm all ready to like it!! BTW, livestock doesn't sweat.
Cutelilteen (again)
2006-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseActually, never mind what I said before, the ratings' just fine as it is. :)
Basil Sunshine
2006-04-12
ch 1,
abuseThat is great!!
Nyachu
2006-03-24
ch 1,
abuseThis is truly a breath of fresh air. I love your writing style, possibly because it reminds me of my own, and, after musachan got me into your art on deviantART, I couldn't wait to read your works here. Thanks to you, I'm now a Wilt/Eduardo fan...but being a slash fan, I guess I should've seen it coming.

The story itself is refreshing, humorous, and fluffy, making it an instant favorite for me. I laughed so hard at Wilt and Ed's last lines; they were really clever. I can't wait to read more from you!
Penname wa Silver B
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseThat was nifty, and so sweet! A shame it's only a one-parter. Great job.
Silly-Gal-11
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuseAww! I love stories like this :)
Cutelilteen
2006-01-10
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, you may want to raise the rating to PG or PG-13 but other then that, it's good. You don't have to reply back to this post.
xKiaxExPyrosx
2006-01-04
ch 1,
abuseLMFAO! That was just the thing I needed to perk me up on a feels-like-Monday-just-seven-more-years-of-school Wednesday! XD I was laughingall through this. You got the characters' attitudes very well and I think you did a great job sneaking humor in throughout this. I was giggling like a madwoman. ;) This is great. It really is, and it's going on my avorites right away. :D

LOL agian! Loved it loved it loved it! Thanks for a good laugh and the usage of my favorite couple in Foster's!

-Kia ;)
Castoro Chiaro
2005-12-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm not at all for WiltEduardo, but this was good. I like it. The funny parts made me laugh and the fluffy ones were ok.

Nice job!
Ami
2005-12-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseXD This was VERY well written! Wow! I personally prefer Mac/Bloo over Wilt/Ed, but the story was so cute I couldn't help but like it! Superb!
azure-tears
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI love Wilt's last line. :D

At any rate, that was adorable. I love Wilt/Ed fluff, even though I won't write it myself. I like the way this came out, especially addressing his injuries. It was, I guess, like a dip in the lake- cool, refreshing, and enjoyable.
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