That was a sad one, but it was gentle... that poodo Xizor.

I am literally crying right now! tThis is so sad, yet so wonderful at the same time. I've read all of the Luke Skywalker/Darth Vader fanfictions on every website, and this is problably my favorite.

WRITE MORE!

this is such an incredible story! it is so powerful and sad. your OC was the perfect narrator.

Wonderful Snif..

So bittersweet. And perfect.

Thanks for writing,
Kin.

My god, that was fantastically written - a real joy to read. Thanks for such a wonderful, sad story - which was also very exciting!
Liz

Now that I found this fic here on I can tell you that I love it to bits. Excellent!

This is my absolute favourite SW fanfic. EVERY time I come to this site I read it. I agree that this is how great fanfic should be written. I loved the inter-woven story lines and metaphors. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Please keep writing. Wonderful.

Awe. What happens next?

Beautiful little dark story - loved it!

*wibbles* *sniff* Oh good gods above... that was *so*...

Goddess, you're amazing. And the OC does not need apologising for! He's amazing too!

This is, without doubt, the way that Star Wars fanfiction should be written. Beautiful, poignant, and so powerful it brought tears to my eyes. Congratulations on a masterpiece, Mina.

This is one of my all-time favorites stories, and I'm glad you posted it here. It's so exquisite, every word is just perfect, and it's... heartbreaking. I've read it many times and each time is as painfully pleasurable as the first time. I love your stories. :)

I have to say this: The story is emotional and really good, great structure and vocabulary, I have to say I love it

So sweet yet so sad! Wish you hadn't killed them all!