Good.

Aw, now that's angsty. I don't really like the ending. It doesn't feel positive, but more like "Falling" is purposely capitalized, if you get what I mean...The beginning pulled me in with its realization of how unpleasant the atmosphere of Bespin must be and how indeed when something that terrible happens you really don't want to remember it, and sometimes can't.

I absolutely LOVED this story. I've completely lost my place in the other one of yourse I'm reading, "Equally Cursed and Blessed," so I decided to see what else you have written. '"I let go?" "Indeed you did, my son."' That was a great part.

free fall free fall all through life if you love me then let go of me i won't be held down by who i used to be

Hmm... Very very good!! I love how you phrase things!

No!

wow that was awesome. this is a oneshot, then? well if it is, that sucks! but great job your writing is very visual which appeals to me.

nice.

Awesome - simply awesome. Your writing skills leave me breathless and so envious!! Great One-shot!

You never disappoint me in my insatiable appetite for Dark Luke, Mina. Extremely well-written and well done, and I love Luke's ending words. Congrats.

...so he fell...and vader saved him..am I right?

If this is a one shot I'm going to KILL you...

Wonderful piece. I am sure you would do a great job continuing it, but if you don't want to continue I respect that, even though I am going to be deprived of a great story. Thank you for sharing this writing with us, I really enjoy it.

Wow! This is really different, in a good way that is! I love origanality! Nice take on both parts! ;)

Extremely well-written with wonderful emotional impact! Excellent last line with subtext--And strangely, falling didn't feel so bad."