Great story, i wished you had continued it because it was great, but the story ending like this is much better than you writing that everyone was going to die, whether it was good or evil that won, people still would've died and everyone can imagine that a great story doesn't always end the way we want, or the way we think...

Exquisite.

Beautiful.

talent such as yours is hard to come by nowadays. You've fleshed out the characters brilliantly and oh so wonderfully echoes that of the way they act and think in cannon.

BTW, did JKR approach you if she could add this to book seven? ;-)

I forgot to add in my last review that I also listened to "Endless summer" by ashlee simpson. You should go check out the songs I listed. I think you'll like them.

This was incredibly beautiful, insightful and a real thinker. You are able to evoke such emotion in the reader which is a rare trait. For chapter 3 I listened to "The best I've ever had" by Vertical Horizon, "Somewhere only we know" by keane and "Almost honest" by Josh Kelley. Please update soon.

I really liked this chapter too. Your Harry is perfect, just like Harry would act and think. It was reminisent of OotP Harry :P And I actually really liked that he was seeing Ginny's "ghost" or whatever, it just fit, somehow. I love this line: "And that the world was nothing more than a holocaust." Very powerful. And I actually really like that you didn't include the war and just ended it this way. That's all this story needs, because that's all this story is about, they're final day and how they all feel about it. Having an epic conclusion would have ruined it.

This chapter is even better than the first. I love stories where Ron is serious, and I'm in love with your Fred, I especially love moments where Fred is serious. And the picture of Mrs. Weasley's brothers, genius! And I didn't mention it in the last review, but this line: "I’d do the same if I had a family to live for." is so sad and...perfect. I also like how you contrasted the parents' reactions. Like, with Hermione her dad was emotional and her mom was calm, and with Ron it was the oppisite. I like that.

I liked this chapter. You make Hermione seem very strong and in character. I can't wait to read the next one!

this was a brilliant set of oneshots! wonderfully told

great first chapter i cant wait to read the next 2!

please update

Oh my goodness, this is so incredibly heart-wrenching. I'm sobbing. I can only imagine how I'll react to the final two chapters...It's so sad to see the characters so broken like this. Not many authors go into how the families feel about the trio leaving, or if they do, it's just the Weasleys. I liked that Hermione's parents' reactions were there. Very well-written. Can't wait for the next installment.

OMG! I love this story! PLEASE UPDATE! i love it to death

This is absolutely fantastic, one of the best stories I've found on the net. You capture the characters and the desperation of their circumstances perfectly. Please update soon!