This story is a little short for my taste, and I was unclear as to the events which led to the death of Gendo, since all you said was Shinji defeated the MP units. That si to say whether you used the Movie's scenerio or your own. Given shinji's growth, and the knowledge he had by the end of the series, I was also disapointed that there was no mention of how his relationship with Rei had changed, I owuld have liked to have heard that they were livng together as brother and sister you see. I also wish you had given Touji, and Hikari a nod, rather than Aida, you know Burgoninng relation ship wise for good measure. Maybe that's just me wanting too mutch Ultra-Mega Fluf, but I think it could have fit well if only you had one more chapter between 1 & 2. In spite of all that I still beleive you deserve a 9.6 out of 10. I hope you keep writing!

This is one of the most satisfying fics I have ever read. You said everything in this fic that should have been said in the anime (or manga - although maybe when they were older). Good work!

AWW, sweet story :)

*sighs with tears in eyes* Kawaii!

Great story kind of reminds me of a sappy romance moive or something. I swear I've seen some foreign film similare to this some where. But any way great job.

It is nice to see the thought process oof the second child, intense angst from Asuka. All in all I liked it.

All through-out the story (Chap 1 & 2) you had some errors (one or two mispelled words and one or two repeated words). but I must say, this is the best story I have ever read this month! The storyline is superb! Some fanfictions dealing with the 'Shinji and Asuka' relationship doesn't have any problems that must be solve. To me...a good story must have a problem, that's what makes the reader be more drawn to the story. At times we might just write rubbish that doesn't even make sense, but this story is well-written! Great Job and Keep it up! :]

Cool fic. I like the idea of Shinji and Asuka comming to terms with eachother. Good fic :)

Wow...this is a great fic, I like the whole idea of ShinjixAsuka reconciling. Good stuff :)

A very nice story, I was touched in particular by that part where Shinji was talking about that photo.

I didn't consider it a waste of my bloody time as I usually do whenever I read a Shinji/Auska fanfic so that's saying something ... my only problem is a writing error at the begining and end of the story (I mean the Misato saying expaserated instead of exhausted and Shinji & Auska saying children instead of child) but other than that ... yah!

Okay, first off, there were some nice bits in this. The two meter rule was pretty amusing and original, and the scene with the picture was kinda nicely done. Sadly, though, the bulk of the plot was recycled, especially the 'Mana telling Shinji that she senses he really loves someone else and sending him to her' scene. I have no problem with waff, but it needs to be executed in an fresh fashion. There are also numerous mistakes with word usage, so I suggest finding a prereader who could help you with that. Hope this helps, and I await future fics.

This is a big step for me when I say that I liked it. Normally I'm a big fan of Asuka/Shinji, but this was well written to the point where Asuka wasn't acting like an arrangont proud ***** all the time. You wrote it well, and I hope you continue to write of this caliber.

ARGH! ANOTHER ASUKAxSHINJI FIC! ITS SO BORING! ITS BEEN DONE TOO MANY TIMES! AHHHHHHHHH!

Heh... A truly beautiful story, I loved the part where Shinji was talking about the picture - that was touching. You have something going here... I did notice a mistake tho. At the start of the chapter, Misato was 'exasperated'... I think you might have been looking for 'exhausted'. Anyway, aside from that I don't see anything else that needs changing. An excellently done fic. 8 of 10

aww, this was sweet lol!