it truly is bad you discontinued it this fic could have been realy good and even if there aren't many at least you had readers if you dicide to continue one day i will be looking forward to it also i have to ask what happened to yukito in this fic?are yukito and hikito related somehow or did you just name him that way just because you wanted to?

But I don't see how Yukito really "sacrificed" himself by turning into a bird... Unanswered questions...

Ooh... Suspense... (-thumbs up-)

A bit queer here, but nonetheless good!

xiaohitsugaya, this is a beautiful story. It’s a shame that you discontinued it. Well if you ever decide to continue it I have it on story alert! [You are also on my Favorite Author list and Author Alert.]

This fic seems very interesting. I would like to see what happens next. I don't mind short chapters, but more detail about Hikito might be nice. -. But your writing style is fun and interesting, so please keep writing!

oi i really like your fanfic so plz try to update soon :)

It sounds interesing so far...A bit confusing though, how old is Hikito?

-Can you please make the next chap longer? XD.

-I have a question, it sounds a bit weird but: What happend on Air? I've only seen episodes 1-3 on the internet. I haven't seen the other 10 so, can you please fill me in...Maybe then I'll understand .

(to daryl) Well, I'm freakin' sorry you disapprove so much of my poem (which got this category on the map, for your information). Why don't you write something, then? (to xiao) Sorry, I just needed to get that off my chest... I like where this is going. Keep up the good work.

gd fic it is better than that poem

Very intriguing. I'm interesting to see where this is going. Yes, short chapters are easy... a little too easy. But I shouldn't complain, at least they guarantee quick updates, eh?

Hmm. The paragraphing during the dialogue needs distinguishing, but it's a promising start. Of course, Air probably originally belongs to the people behind the video game. But eh, it's the here and now, I guess. Good job, I want to see more when you can.