 Ms.A7Xlover 2009-07-26 . chapter 7**...now im crying like a damn baby...you should be honored only good emotionally strong fanfictions put me in this state..I love your style of writing...It keeps the reading riled in;...Like those reading are the characters... To be able to feel the raw emotions like this it takes a really good writer...I look forward to reading more of your work o.0 |
 Annabelinda Tsuki 2009-06-28 . chapter 11Hmm...
Ok, I will start my review with the title! BRILLIANT! The wya you incorporated the title there at the end, it was quite brilliant, genius really. Playing from the scene of Tenten not having her weapons...
I am not sure how well it works as a sequel...definitely more of a companion fic, definitely, but it does wrap up Tenten's turmoil quite nicely.
I do remember cringing at several scenes, just because they were so...what's the word...maybe what I am looking for is fluff, even though I am not real experianced as to what exactly fluff is. The scenes were rushed, almost, and feelings and thoughts took paths they weren't quite ready to follow quite yet, but in the end, I found the story quite satisfying, definitely worth my time of reading it!
Thanks for pointing out the sequel! I would have been driven crazy of not knowing what happened to Tenten, she is just so awesome! Plus, it has to be hard to write Tenten fics, seeing as how we never learn all that much about her in the series...she just never plays significant parts. So, the way you wrote Tenten in this was extremely believable, totally beyond believable, and I congratulate you!
Over and out,
Annabelinda |
 Nick Yonkee *Tenten's biggest* 2008-11-17 . chapter 8 OMG! This chapter made me want to cry because of all the excitement of my absolute favorite kunoichi! (Tenten of course) I wished Tenten would finally realize that she is too good for Neji. |
 DotsOnAWall 2008-08-02 . chapter 11this is an AWESOME STORY! I ABSOLUTLY loved it! |
 RuAndKi 2008-07-06 . chapter 11aww wow, this story is really good :) |
 Chigiri Sasaki 2008-04-25 . chapter 11so cute! loved it lots. |
 paperflower3 2008-04-20 . chapter 11I love the story line you went for.
Not to sure if I like all the extra semi-main charater(s).
But other then that I loved it.
Great conflice between the two 'best friends' in not knowing were they stand.
It is just an awesome fic!
It would be wonderful to see what will happen to the two of them.
Maybe do a sequel?
Keep up the great work!
~Paperflower3 |
 SiMPLY.AMAZiNG 2008-01-20 . chapter 11♥ed it [: |
 neko 2008-01-11 . chapter 11 at first it wasn't that um understandable but in the end it was super nice! |
 wasabimon 2007-12-26 . chapter 11o.m.f.g.!
freekin tight story!
i read "a blossom with a reason" before this though
whew! at least it didnt mess up the story!
u should make a sequel |
 Solitude Whispers 2007-12-09 . chapter 11I absolutely love it! Oh, my God, I cried so many times while reading this. I was thinking how much of an ** Neji was, but I knew that, in the end, he wouldn't go without choosing Tenten.
Man, when my mother called me on the phone in the middle of me reading the story, I was so aggitated that I couldn't talk to her. I had to get back to the story! Ah! > |
 Krisymkk 2007-09-04 . chapter 11 Loved it!
I thought for a minute though that the rating had changed or something. I had to go back up and make sure i was reading something rated M.
Anyways,
Loved It! |
 zaraki.chan 2007-08-28 . chapter 11wow! this was really a great fic to read! nice job and thank you! |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2007-08-27 . chapter 11Nice story! |
 DaaNi-ChAn 2007-08-24 . chapter 11*Cries; tears of joy*
This is one of the Best Tenji (NejiTenTen) stories I've ever read. I will read your other story. Last chapter was the best, very cute.
Keep up the good work ^_^ |