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| Gabby 2008-04-05 ch 8, anon. | abuseI like the humor in it, and the fact that i can already tell Greg's personality. This is pretty good actually |
| Gotsta Have My Hardy 2007-06-07 ch 5,  | abuseHey! Great story but I have to point out somethings. Alot isn't a word! Its a lot. Also its a federal offence for a guy of Gregs age to be making out with a 15 year old! |
| curfew 2006-07-10 ch 32, anon. | abuseyou really don't know when to stop do you? you have so many plots going on at one time, that you almost can't distinguish one from the next. Instead of craming them all into one story you should have split them up. You have some good ideas, just don't cram them all into one story line, cause that makes it hard to read. |
| y 2006-07-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseis that just some sick fantasy of yours? cause that's disgusting, just so you know. it's called pedophilia. you don't go putting your fantasies in fanfics. not that type, that's just gross. |
| SilverBlood666 2006-03-01 ch 32, | abuseWell, it's not Nick/Greg, but it's okay. Keep the good work coming. |
| ds 2006-02-28 ch 4, anon. | abusei was liking yur story up until Greg liked the 15 year old |
| damien455 2006-01-22 ch 32, | abusegood chaps. cant wait for more! update soon! |
| damien455 2006-01-08 ch 31, | abusegood chap. cant wait for more |
| damien455 2006-01-06 ch 29, | abusegood chappie update soon |
| damien455 2006-01-03 ch 28, | abusegood chap. cant wait for more! |
| damien455 2006-01-02 ch 27, | abusegood chapter! cant wait for the next! |
| damien455 2006-01-02 ch 26, | abusegood chap! o liked the last sentence, "Nick, what kind of father tries to murder his son?" powerful. cant wait for more! |
| damien455 2005-12-31 ch 23, | abusejust read the story straight through, i love it! update soon! |
| fairylady 2005-12-21 ch 18, anon. | abusethat wasnt too much, it was great!! you have to keep going plz! |
| knadineg 2005-12-19 ch 18, | abuseWho attacked Greg?!! I need more & soon :D |