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| YaoiLover162 2008-08-23 ch 3, | abuseOkay so this is probably gonna sound weird and I'm not good with like emotions (that's freaky in and of itself I'm told)but my chest was hurting like really really bad when I read the part about Naru and Sasu hugging. I'm obviously assuming I was sad but it was worse than any other time. Okay I just realized how stupid that sounded. Oh well. Any way this story almost made me cry. Your stories are always so...real I guess. Still sounding weird so I'm just gonna shut up now. But I love your stories. |
| emmypf 2008-08-11 ch 3, | abuseI really liked this story! Don't know about you, but i didn't find any grammar or spelling issues. Hope you feel a little better after writing this. Sort of getting it off your chest. I feel like telling you an interesting and funny story. My mum was bullied a bit when she was a kid. Always by girls her own age. Funny how that happens... Anyway, this one girl would hit her and stuff, but one day mum told her 'enough is enough' (or some similar thing) so the girl told mum to meet her after school to settle this. So, after school mum goes to meet this girl. The other girl prepares to fight and what does mum do? She gives her one huge solid punch, right in the face. The other girl ran off crying. And mum was never bullied since then. ** got what she deserved. Unfortunately, you can't run and hide forever, no matter how much easier it is. You have to face them. I'm one of those people who would try and stop someone picking on someone else. Call the cops and try to stop them if it's a group. I also don't want to get hurt, but i wouldn't be afraid of getting a little ruffed up or giving the punch myself. I also belive in karma; what goes around comes around. Love to know what eventually happened to the scum who caused you pain. They deffinatley deserve it. Hope you can find peace in your life with your new friends. Showing your parents this story might make them understand you more and where you're coming from. Just a thought, i've never really been through a situation like yours before. Just the small name calling stuff. **. lol! Hope everything works out for you! XD oxox |
| EricaElricQuickSilverAlchem... 2008-08-05 ch 3, | abuseThe deepest story I've read so far, the emotions were almost touchable(sp) Good work keep on writing.I'm happy you found good friends:) |
| kayl 2008-07-17 ch 3, anon. | abusei liked it naruto was a little confusing though with the mood swings and everything it was so confusing >.< o well nice work |
| Xcandal2457 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abusewow, there's a lot of emotion in this...this is really good |
| hgjguh 2008-07-13 ch 3, anon. | abusebad |
| ReDAnGeL234 2008-07-09 ch 3, | abuseFrankly, this is one of the deepest fanfics I have ever read. I feel bad about what happened to you. Heck, I might get picked on but I don't get beaten at all. Seriously this is one of the best ^.^V Peace! |
| Meia-Noite 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abusewoah! that's one story you have here. the lessons that you're trying to impart really get through your writing. the emotions shine through even though the story is short and simple. it has even inspired me a bit - and trust me, i'm not that easy to inspire. really powerful. |
| jessica499499 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseThat was bueatful.What hurt you made you stronger in the long run.It's made you empathetic.It's made you the person you are to day.Everything happens for a reason.Maybe someday You'll be that random good person who holds someone as they cry. |
| randomly 2008-06-30 ch 3, | abuseI loved this story. Haha, yeah, it seems us 'freaks' find together in places like this... But it's actually quite nice to know there's other people who are like you... I've never actually been beaten, but i promise you, i was the most hated person in my whole school for two years - until i moved, i couln't handle it any more - but everything's good now, so yeah, one should definitely not give up! Random acts of kindness are some of the sweetest, i think, and this story was so sweet - thank you for writing something so wonderful ^^ |
| dragonice0 2008-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI will not tell you, I know how you fill; because, frankly I don't. but I know what it is like to feel as if you are not worth the tiniest insult. don't get me wrong I would never like to have the beatings but when you are moved form place to place, spending less than two years at one given home, and knowing it is for the best if your mother gets her PH.D. but you still fill as if you don't matter to her in the sort scope of things. And the only time some one even has seen the really you is when the only male figure in your life dies. what I am trying to say is don't hide like me, because I don't know how I exposed to act with others and when I do it fills just like that, an act; live your life to the fullest and always fight back. Because even if I have not been in that many fights I my life, I know most bullies stop if the you fight back but if they don't back down, get out of there; believe me, not one of my most intelligent times. well to you and your new lease on life. And me finding my true smile.I know lame, but I cant remember they last time I did not have to fake a smile. |
| Brie92 2008-06-22 ch 3, | abusehat was such a sweet ending. it had me smile. |
| NarutoxxAddict 2008-06-22 ch 3, | abuseYou know what? I totally agree with you. Even though I've never been bullied myself, I can totally see where your coming from. And it sounds like you now have some amazing friends. Which is lot. Since my friends (a few of them) are being really horrible at the moment. You should feel proud that you've been able to write something about what happened, and that must have been pretty hard. The worst I've ever been called is "Ginger" since y'know, I'm ginger, but that's not as bad as you. So I have a lot of respect for you, for being able to get passed whatever you've been through and put up with it all, and then put a smile on at the end. And now on the fic. I thought it was a great fic, with a lot of meaning, though there was a couple of spelling errors, and a couple of grammar error, Hell, I'm no different, so I can't say much, nobody's perfect eh? But I really loved the way you portrayed everything in this, the way Naruto acts, the way Sasuke acts. Hell, even Kakashi. And you know. The thing with Naruto and suicide. I wouldn't put it past him in his younger years to have tried something like that. So I though your fic was amazing, with a great lesson. I hope you keep up the standards and get better with it. :D < That is a smiley face for you! (I know this review was probably corny and you've probably heard it all before, but it's true!) |
| ScifiSOS 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseHeh good story, bit sad but part of life and some people unfortunately go through it. Seeing all your other loong reviews make me wonder if i should bore you with mine. I'm glad you are making your stories with real life things. The only real life thing i can do it mainly lonelyness and hearts being broken. Hope you keep writing. ~Rens |
| meneeale 2008-06-07 ch 3, | abuseIm really sorry. I've never really been bulied before, but I do agree. Those who stand out in the sidelines and do nothing are worse then the bullies themselves. See I told you I'd read the other stories! And I loved this one. Again, Im sorry for what you have been through. As I said I've never experienced it, but boy have I witnessed it. And its horrible. |