Hey this is pretty cool! The only thing constructive I can say is you might want to look out for punctuation, sometimes the sentence went on for awhile and it took me a little bit to realize that they were actually different sentences. Ohter than that, this story is actually pretty good! Yeah that is pretty mysterious how Asuka's father got all quiet when she asked him about Jin. Wonder what's up?

Great chapter! Very interesting! Can't wait for the update

AH! I finally made it! *waves* Sorry for the huge delay but college should be informed that people need some free time. Apparently someone missed that small detail. Anyways I came to read and review as I said I would.

Somewhat different from what I had read before from you. More focussed on the background story than in the fighting part per se but it doesn't lose because of it. I quite like it.

Especially that booming news "I am not your father". I'm almost seeing Kasuya coming from somewhere saying "Join the dark side of the Force" (Yeah, I do like Star wars lol).

And Jin is coming *cheers* My favorite character from the whole game ya know? AH! *looks freaked out* I am chaneling Raijin ya know?

Anyways good work. You keep going. I'll try to follow it more closely from now on *nods*

See ya, Reyavie

Yay, you updated! This chapter was pretty cool, Asuka learns that Kazuya is her father! Wow, can't wait for her reaction!

Hmm...this Rex dude...I sense some love triangle comming in with him and Hwoarang...*strokes chin in wonder*

update soon!

Hey! Great job! I'm starting to like your works. *smile*. Can't wait for you to update after christmas...!

from ryu herself...

ARGH ARGH ARGH! That was such a bad place to stop! I'll bet that ending wouldve given heaps of readers a heart attack! U so shudve kept going but I guess it makes ur update all the more anticipated here. Cant wait 4 1, this was a goody. lol Rex. Kinda hated the fact that Jin was annoyed with Xiao sending him texts. U kno me man! Ok, cant wait 4 an update!

it needs work. alot actually. missing puctuation, some words too probly. but it was alright i guess. and the dream...thaz crazy. you should put the punctuation before the end of the quotes and when some one else is talking use should make it into another paragraph then the last quote. just some suggestions. later.

Lin

Oh, very interesting fic here. lil encounter with hwoarang in the elevator? I knew u wud add Hwoarang randomly like that, lol! Cant wait 2 see wot the 2 hav 2 say to each other wen Asuka calls "Shingo". Update!

this is pretty good but i think it would be more clearer to kn whos talking if you were to separate the dialouges...just something that others might critize you on idk aright g2g later

Lin

OMG! Awesome chapter! Update! _

Yay, another kick-ass Asuka Kazama fic! They're aren't a lot of Asuka Kazama fics, and if there is one, it's shit, so I'm really pleased.

Awesome start, continue, and same with Hunting Hawks Combined :)

update ASAP!