I liked it. I was looking to read somthing that was a little more...sad. Don't get me wrong, your writting was very good and your idea was one i took a great interest in. You did a Great job overall!

-Surashi

*sobbing uncontrollably* That was so sad and sweet. *hiccup* I thought it was beautiful. Good Job *hiccup. continue sobbing*

Boohoo!Realy nice fic but you kiled Hinata.(snff)But Arashi is here.

*sobs* I hate sad stories! Did you know that 'Arashi' means 'storm'? Just wondering...

recovered fast...not curing fast. I like it. Very nice and short. Glad that Naruto has something to remember of Hinata.

One thing you might wanna do is correct your usage of the words "live" and "life" One cannot "life", it is a noun. "Live" is the verb. So Hinata loses her life and tells Naruto that he must live on. That kind of made it difficult to read. Grammatical errors like that are very distracting and take away from the beauty of your story.

This is neat