That does make it make more sense! i always wondered what happened after the magical Expecto and then all of a sudden they're in the hospital wing.
Great story!

This was a great connector between these scenes. I love the way you portrayed his need to protect the children! I really enjoyed this!

Instead, one has to wonder if anyone ever treated the crack in his head.

Probably. We all learned how much _his_ life was worth after saving so many others.

Excellant job! You did a brilliant job with this combining the books and movies, brilliant work. You did Severus's character wonderfully, thoughts and all were cannon sounding.

Very in character portrayal of Snape whilst also exploring some interesting aspects of his personality. I like how you haven't made his motivations too cloyingly 'honourable'.

I really liked this Snape POV. I could see the scene from the movie as I read this. Excellent!

O -- excellent insights into Snape's character!

Awesome. Great pov from Snape.