Beautiful little one-shot. I really like this, even if it makes me sad seeing the way his mother threats him. Well, she's sick but I think Ritsuka's father should do something about that and not just looking away. *sniffle*

Well, I really loved Ritsuka's interaction with his Soubi. That was really sweet and touching. Yes, I think they got a step further, with Ritsuka being strong. :) Oh, and Soubi said *it* again.
I love the way he does that, every time. ^^;

this is good, i really wish that ritsuka's dad would do something about his mom.

Oh thought it was so cute.I always feel so bad for him,but he does have his soubi and that makes all the difference.

I don't have a strong, or weak, grasp of the characters and their personalities, so I can't really tell if you did Soubi and Ritsuka right. They seemed fine to me, though Ritsuka seemed a little...I dunno. Odd. XP Whatever.

The beginning was downright, heart-wrenchingly beautiful. (That doesn't look right. :/) I've only read little one-shots of Loveless, and I keep enjoying them. XP Thank you for widening my view on the anime/manga! I think I shall have to watch it again.

Sorry for the craptastic review. As usual.

~Zen-chan~

So. Very. Cute. Oh my goodness. It is a little sad that Ritsuka and his mommy can't see eye to eye, but it's great to know that he will always have Soubi. Kinda makes you teary-eyed.

Loveless is one of my favorite anime, and I think you did a fine job as Soubi. He is a complicated character, who just keeps getting more and more complicated, if it's possible. You did great though. ^_^

-EoS

Ver very pretty. Really good.

Aw. XD And I know what you mean... Soubi is very hard to write. He's too unpredictable and... weird... and... sporadic... and blah. But this fic was very good. I love the way you captured Ritsuka and his emotions towards his mother. What he thinks of her, what she thinks of him, what he's trying to be. It was very interesting, and I never really thought about it that way. Overall, great job.

It was very good, and I do love the happy-ish ending! ^-^

What, no making out?
D:
Very nice though.
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::Takes out pump to inflate ego:: I loved this story. I thought you did a great job and I was happy when you had Ritsuka stand up to mommy of HELL! Boya anywho Great job. Huggles
Nikkler

AWESOME!! I thought that was really really good!!