Great job Bridget! I hope you'll write more. You portrayed Mike and Jill perfectly. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

Too cute! I can totally see Jill doing that, and Mike reacting that way. Great Job! thanks so much for posting it! we need more Rookies fan fiction.

Bridget, this was great! You got Mike and Jill down perfectly. It was so cute the way she wanted to surprise him. I can't wait to read more.