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| iboneki 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseI like your idea about them both faking it... I bet you're right. Nice job :) |
| JoyBean 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked your story and although you might not think it's your favorite, it truely is very good writing. |
| thatTaylorgirl 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abusethis is good... I wrote a postep to Still Life as well...from Nick's POV (primarily what couldabeen after the short visit). I really like what you've written...really liked the POV from Kelly here...is interesting to think about what she could have been thinking during the episode.. will be interesting to see how all this post grave danger stuff plays out the rest of the season! nicely done!! |
| chrissie0707 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's okay that this was just the scene from her POV. I agree that the scene was frustrating and short - but I think that there's something more with her coming up. This is a nice little insight - Kelly not being shown as evil. I don't think she is, just...changed by things, the same way Nick was. I like this. Chrissie And weren't you just ecstatic to see that the 'stache was gone?? I was watching with my roomie and were clapping when we saw that it was. |