AH THAT WAS SO BEASTY!
good job! i bow to you *bows* =^_^=

hahaha...this is a raelly hilarious chapter...It was really good i liked it..hahaha...^-^

Its a good story. hehe, i dont mind yaoi, and Ren is my favourite character! keep on writing16-61

OMG SQUEE!
LOVERS IT TANK YOU! =3

Oh, thats sweet.

It was good, BUT u need to write a second chapter.

make sequal or another chapter pleases ^_^

Funny and cute at the same time. You make a promising author. Keep up the great work!

i loved it. i always love a good yoai to pass the time

umm... as a guy, i thought it was a bit messed up. this definitely needs a yaoi warning or something. i read the manga series, and yes, i am aware that Fafa turns to Ren when she is kissed, but CMON! PLZ HAVE A WARNING FOR YAOI! OH, AND THE REAL REN WOULD NOT WANT TO KISS AI AGAIN! I AM SORRY, BUT ITS TRUE! other than that, it was well done. i liked your writing.

i loved it!

KYA! i love these two! n_n ren's my fav character...ain't he adorable? but alas. no matter how "adorable" he may be...i consider his as the seme in this couple. *grins to herself* MWUAHAHAHAHAHA! DA POW'R OF YAOI!

-6 hours later-

ok, i'm all better now.

it was funny as all hell

wow. That was excellently captured. and a good cut off too. keep up the good work!

That is so cute. i was almost squeling it was so cute. please keep writing.