Finally a story where the girl totally resists and doesn't end up with the boy! I'm personally very happy with this ending, I like your works a lot :)

the end...very funny, you had me for a few seconds until I scrolled further down. ha, ha, ha.:)

That is SO wrong. Somebody smack Renfro for me please.

Man what did they do to her? Alec liked her not this robot solider. Man oh man. Renfro is just plain evil.

LOL...don't feel bad girl. Had it coming.

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I started reading this earlier today and have not stopped until I was done. Holy crap can you write! I loved it! Even though I've never read the original series or story this is based off of... I can't BELIEVE you ended it like this! Holy crap! You had some guts to surprise the readers! I think It fits though. I hope you're satisfied with this, cause you should be. This Is amazing! Absolutely positively loved it

wow. great story. the ending killed me, but i was completely engrossed the entire time. :)

Becasue of the whole rape theme, I was kinda' on the fence regarding this fic, until this chapter. Alec suddenly beginnning to question everything because of his exposure to Max and her morals was the perfect place to take this.

ANGST! *evil glare* oh, no, that CANT be the end... but it was perfect at the same time... then again, you made Max look like a wimp... hmm... i'm torn about this one... it was great, though, a good read for sure. awesome job!

ah, much better!

NO! she was supposed to keep fighting! *sobcrywhine*

max will totally win.

oh, too funny! i almost DIED when i started reading this. it's GREAT! watch for typos, that's about it; grammar's good, story's good... ON to the next chapter!

Hooray for sequel! Maybe then you could have them reunite because they belong together!