Wow..just...wow. So dark and yet so intriguing and well-written! I've never seen any of the "Saw" movies, as I am a bit squeamish around gore, but I will not deny that (as far as I can gather) the plot is very well thought out and thought-provoking. I also cannot deny that your idea is a wonderful twist that the scriptwriters of the movies have apparrantly overlooked. It would be cool to see your take on Jigsaw's point of view on this scenario? What if he found out that one of his victims actually did want to die? Would he then not kill that victim, so as not to give him/her the satisfaction?

Best wishes,
Marcie Cohen

I thought this poem was REALLY good! You should try to write more.

wow, that's the bitchinest piece of fan-poetry i've ever ever ever read.

Wow...that is an awesome poem.You really captured the general morbid and dark feelings of Saw.This isn't halfway decent,it's great.

im reviewing cuz that was amazing! im showing ur poem to some of my friends on house of jigsaw!

Wow. This is an amazing poem. Gave me shivers.

Wow! I have shivers...I give this a nice 8 out of 10! Very nice! This is totally different than most fan fics and it goes beyond the fact that we are victims. There are some souls who do think that way which makes the SAW franchise even more real. This is very good. Just work on the editing a little bit. I can imagine this person almost to be real. This poem is very good indeed.

*glomps Liv* Hey Olivia, missa chickabee! Thanks for the plug of my story, ;)
And this is way more than halfway-decent, this is one of the few concepts that we haven't beaten to death. Very original, and like all of your stuff, kicks major **. Love you.
~_`Ayesha
PS: I hope you know Billy's going to come over and stalk you now. A lot. Lol.