great, as all the others!

I certainly hope that it just happened this way... but if it did, then there would be no dramatic story, right? *sigh* If only their pride weren't so big...

Well written and very intriguing. I love the details you use to describe the characters. Good job!

pretty good

Good! I loved that! It was so sweet! :D Love, Erika

wow...you could feel the pain,that is a fantastic story.congratulations

great one!

hey i just thought i'd write to say that your story is really great! i think you captured Maaximus' character really well and it's nice to have a happy ending for a Gladiator story!

awesome! Love your stories! keep 'em coming!

read this at your website... glad you posted it here

I think this is a wonderful story, and it sends a very powerful message: Love conquers all.

-Russlvr1