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| Xmaster 2006-02-14 ch 6,  | abuseWoot Woot!! Tidus, okay yeah i find him annoying but hey, you make him sound so sweet and loving! Anyways, all of the chapters were written amasingly, perfect!! And as for the overall 'Story'- PERFECT! Yep yep, Absolutly, Fantabulosa Perfectimo!! |
| Xmaster 2006-02-14 ch 5, | abuseBrilliant too! Really really good, i love it so much! And i think it had Lulu in there, right? *nod* Hmm, i think..hehehe, anyways, just as good as the others. Really well described! *claps* I faved this story! |
| Xmaster 2006-02-14 ch 4, | abuseI really realy liked that, sorry i haven't reviewed in a long time, forgot to, hehehe. I especially like 'The bottle with four X's' very nice *nods* The overall description was brilliant. I love how each sentence means so much, you really don't need to write lots, this is brilliant! I just love this so much! Really good! |
| Warui-Usagi 2006-02-12 ch 6, | abuseThey were all very cute and beautifully written drabbles! Excellent, well done! ^^ |
| Sonora-Margaret 2006-02-11 ch 6, | abuseWow. That was was just amazing. I don't think anyone else could have done this better. (I know I couldn't!) I liked the little side notes. Very nice. Good job. Good luck. Good night! |
| Luv2Game 2006-02-10 ch 6, | abuse...Nice! They were all very good. Short, but well-written and enjoyable. ^.^ Wakka's was probably my favorite...But, you did a great job on all of them! |
| wickedsugarrush 2006-02-10 ch 6, | abuseOverall, this story was...wonderful. ^_^ It made me all warm and fuzzy. |
| wickedsugarrush 2006-02-10 ch 3, | abuseUtter nonsence, you did an excellent job of portraying the "real" Rikku. Your constant reference to the sun and her halo made sence. It was sweet. |
| wickedsugarrush 2006-02-10 ch 2, | abuseIt was a little vague, but once ponderd enough I knew what you were talking about. You chose to show rather than tell who Lulu is. Not what. |
| wickedsugarrush 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a impactful peice of work. It's hearting. Perhaps a little more description on the surroundings to bring the total surrealness to the ground. The transitions were a little rocky, just finish your thought then find the little puzzle piece that is the grace of the transition. You described Kimahri well. |
| ThousandEmotions 2006-02-04 ch 5, | abuseWow this story is awesome! It's short, but you get the important things in :) beautiful! Ellen |
| Lukkaya 2006-02-03 ch 5, | abuseLovelovelove the mentioning of Wakka/Lulu. Subtle, but it's still there. I have a hard time not mentioning one when I write about the other, too. |
| Sonora-Margaret 2006-02-03 ch 5, | abuseThat was nice, cute. |
| Sweet Valentine 2006-01-25 ch 4, anon. | abusePerfect Auron perspective. Excellent. This is my favorite chapter, thus far. Keep up the great work. I absolutely love your style of writing! |
| Sonora-Margaret 2006-01-25 ch 4, | abuseThat was really good to. I liked the ending. |