I know that you wrote this story a long time ago! but I think that it was very touching, and I love how you even kept Ayame in character. For this story I give you ***** STARS!

I loved it; It was great; the ending was hilarious. Ayame would report everything to Hatori((poor Hari...big headache)) but you should have made the snake confront Akito and save the day.

It was the sweetest oneshot ever! _

!Haru Cherry!

I love it! It's such a wonderful brother bonding fic

haha... It would happen like that, I think. And Aaya WOULD call Hatori... XDD

The snake should stop calling the dragon every time. Tohru's the only one Yuki cares for? Yeah, for now...until he meets Machi and company. He's really gonna get around...don't any of you sickos in the background dare imply anything. You know what I mean. No, starry night blue, I don't mean you.

AW! That was an awesome BL (Brotherly Love) fic!

I don't like it...

I LOVE it! Did I scare you? XD

And I really love this! It's so beautiful and it's kinda like what happens in book #13

Aw! *squeals and claps* I love these little brother stories. And nice touch at the end, with Ayame reporting everything to Hatori, as usual... ah, really, really good stuff.

Aww! It was really sweet :) I hope Aya and Yuki can get along like this by the time Furuba (the manga) ends hehe.

I've been planning on writing a Brotherly Love fic for a while, and now you've definetley inspired me!

Cute!

That was cute! I liked it very much!

Oww! So toxicatingly cute!I was hopign u'd actually make it longer and write about what Akito threateneed to do and how Ayame stopped him! Nice piece of work tho!

So wonderfully Yuki and Aya! Very well written, and an excellent story!