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| yonipJA 2006-11-14 ch 11,  | abuset'is an awesome story dude. Keep writing, and I am really looking forward to your next chapter. PAYCE! |
| kizkool 2006-11-10 ch 10, | abuseHEY JUZ!! well i read the story again cos id 4gotten it... and a good chappie it twas! 2day lee and i went shopping 4 sum sister bonding time.. spent a lot of it in target trying to convince lee that if u can see ur undies through the skirt its see-through... anyway cya on monday!! I LOVE MI FUZZIE! love kat |
| MissBritt-xoo 2006-10-13 ch 10, | abuselove the story! kepp up the good work |
| Viktor Krum's lazyllama101 2006-09-20 ch 10, | abuseawesome update soon |
| Jarno 2006-09-20 ch 4, | abuseHuh? You lost me somewhere, I'm confused. If this is after HBP, then how did Ron became Quidditch captain? Why is Malfoy still in Hogwarts? |
| Viktor Krum's lazyllama101 2006-09-19 ch 3, | abusetp the next chapter woosh! |
| Midnite At Noon 2006-02-05 ch 8, | abusegood story. nice plot. *adds to fave stories list* *adds to story alert list* |
| Arikana Nakaria 2006-01-29 ch 8, | abuseOMG! that was good. why not try pairing: 1. Ron with Parvati-lolz that would be funny 2. Draco with Lavender-that'd be even more funny xD and while Ron falls immensely in love with Parvati, Angelina finally realizes she truly loves Ron more instead of Fred. How would Ron react to that though? sorry this was so long, I just have lots of ideas just not a way to get them out. But I'm working on my hopefully-soon-to-be-published fic! lolz xD |
| Shadow of the Day 2006-01-28 ch 8, | abuseHi I really enjoyed the story so far sorry i havent reviewed yet but now i have.Oh an am i right by assuming you have read the series of unfortunate events? from your reviewer Liezl/mauraders-rule |
| donnied 2006-01-28 ch 8, | abusethe typos were better and you wrote this chapter ten times better than the other ones. i suggest reading through your chapter when you are done reading it |
| stacey18 2006-01-28 ch 8, | abusegd fic update soon please |
| rituel 2006-01-27 ch 8, | abuseOkay, the only turn off of this chapter is the seemingly forced ending.. The story had a good flow from the beginning, and a relatively good pace to it.. but suddenly at the end it's like you went into Double Overdrive or something.. I believe it is perfectly okay for authors to leave cliffhangers at the end of the chapter.. (it's irritating, but perfectly legal) rather than have an end that seems forced... emphasis on "seems" please.. Other than that, i'm interested in where this story is headed.. Sorry if this offended you in any way.. Update soon!! ^^ |
| Elyse90505 2006-01-27 ch 8, | abuseOmg...POOR GINNY! Evil EVIL Draco...I want to kill him even more than usual now... Harry is so sweet and protective of her. How kind... Anyways...well written chapter once again |
| Ms.LucyWeasly 2006-01-22 ch 7, | abusejustice justice justice...THAT WAS BRILLIANT!! haha. |
| rituel 2006-01-21 ch 7, | abuseokay... for starters in my opinion (and hopefully everyone else's) you're getting better at writing.. you just need to work on the typos. it's not a big deal in story writing, actually, but if ever you feel to write article's and such it's quite a big deal. I'm sorry but i am currently unable of making constructive comments and/or suggestions, but i'm facing some personal issues at the moment.. Well, i hope you update soon! ^^ |